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April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The story itself is quite enjoyable, though I feel the characterization is a bit off on everyone but Joker. Joker, you have awesome!
Though you said yourself that you were going a bit OOC with them. The conflict between warrior and woman is an interesting one, and I'd love if you explored it more. But in order to do that, you need to keep Shepard a little more on the warrior side most times.
Though you said yourself that you were going a bit OOC with them. The conflict between warrior and woman is an interesting one, and I'd love if you explored it more. But in order to do that, you need to keep Shepard a little more on the warrior side most times.
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February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing story, it was a little rushed (like you said) in the last chapter but over all this is a story I would love to read again. Maybe Bioware will extend out the romance for these kinda couples! Oh and thank you for officially putting 4 am by lostprophets on my playlist!
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January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love! Are you gonna have a sequel? Please do!
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fanfic shame it does not have more views. I also suggest that you upload this fanfic to http://www.fanfiction.net where it will most be more easily found. Good Work Author :)
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August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this fic from start to finish, Shepard/Garrus is one of my most favorite pairings of all time and you just played it out so beautifully (and sexily). Nice work and I'm looking forward to any of your future writings. ^_^