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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 10 and 11 were so nice to read. Fran and Miles making love was the best! :)
Please keep going, this story is amazing! Hoping to maybe read other Miles Edgeworth parts! ;)
The Adrian part was quite good too! I like dominatrix!Franziska, and because Adrian is a lesbian the atmosphere in this chapter was different in a good way! ;)
Keep going, this is awesome! :D
Please keep going, this story is amazing! Hoping to maybe read other Miles Edgeworth parts! ;)
The Adrian part was quite good too! I like dominatrix!Franziska, and because Adrian is a lesbian the atmosphere in this chapter was different in a good way! ;)
Keep going, this is awesome! :D
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July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My favorite is her fucking scruffy. Fuck its the BEST shit in the world!
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June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice series, I love how you add parts of the games, yet still make the sex fit, the action itself is brilliant and the way you mimic Von Karma's "foolishly foolish fool" style of speaking never fails to bring a smile. I'm not over keen on the Gumshoe scenes, maybe that's just me though as it is very logical and hopefully you'll revisit Mia, as you said, no-one would ever dominate her in her own office, so a grudge match of sorts would be appreciated.
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June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVING this so far. Please continue!
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June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well thanks for getting on that formatting so quickly. TBH I'm not much a fan of the detective but you're writing is hot in my opinion. Any chance of Phoenix or Maya?
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, though I have to wonder about her ability to get away with this (though this is the same world where she can use that whip in the court room without penalty). Are you planning of Miles or any other men reappearing?
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June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Chap 1 and 2 were the best!
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