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October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Everything about this was simply amazing. Your descriptive words, your pacing, the fact that you managed to keep everyone in-character... It was all great! Throughout the entire story, I felt like I was actually there watching everything take place. The evolution of Blake and Jayden's relationship was paced perfectly. It didn't feel rushed at all. Overall, you're a great writer and it really showed!
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March 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeease do some more and much longer chapters! Your writing is amazing and so descriptive I love it ;) Your fic is the holy grail! <3
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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really, really enjoyed the story so much!
It was incredibly credible as the characters still retained their original personalities and the accent you gave Norman helped me envision them.
Such a beautifully written story, I just love how the profanity compliments the story-telling.
Love it! <3 I wish there was more!
It was incredibly credible as the characters still retained their original personalities and the accent you gave Norman helped me envision them.
Such a beautifully written story, I just love how the profanity compliments the story-telling.
Love it! <3 I wish there was more!
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July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My...GOD.
I can't believe I missed this! Dear lord, this is fantastic! I almost never check AFF.net because so few post here; but now I think I'll need to check more often!
You know I already loved your first installment, so I'll focus on the second. I LOVED everything about it, but probably my favorite parts of this story is how embarrased and bashful Norman gets. I don't care much for fics that have these two in a relationship where they get to used to one another too quickly. I loved evrything from Norman blushing in the car, not wanting to look at Blake naked, to being ashamed of being fingered. Delighful! It's always so much more erotic to me that way.
May I just say, the way you introduce Norman in the second installment is very well done. The way he's trying to get off of ARI is very sensible, gettig upset but still willing to do the 2-3 hour trip, regardless...Blake's concern was also becoming of him, I believed.
Probably one of my favorite Blayden scenes I've read- Blake walking into the shower with a tube of lube, then fingering him. :3 EROTIC MOTHERFUCKING SHIT. I also must give you BIG KUDOS for not forgetting how important lube is in anal sex. It always sort of erks me how writers have anal sex going on with little to no lube- you really need SOMETHING, even if it's just spit, in able to have anal sex. The more, the better for both. If they do mean to include it, it certaintly is almost never mentioned! Though it's a very sensual act- and I feel it should absolutely be written. The way he does it to Jayden, too, is also wonderful.
The sexxxx! It was so amazing, I've read this whole fic about four times already, and I still think it's so mind-blowingly hot!! Not to mention, very accurate. Sex is such an act between two people- a cooperation. Though so many simply just have Blake pound on him until he cums- so I was really, really surprised how realistic yet HOT this part was. Kudos!
You might want to post this on ff.net. I'm sure many would appreciate you for it. One of the best I've read! I really hope you continue. (and get more reviews, as well!) P.S. I'm very tired and it's very late...sorry for this crappy review. But know that I am VERY happy you wrote this! ;)
I can't believe I missed this! Dear lord, this is fantastic! I almost never check AFF.net because so few post here; but now I think I'll need to check more often!
You know I already loved your first installment, so I'll focus on the second. I LOVED everything about it, but probably my favorite parts of this story is how embarrased and bashful Norman gets. I don't care much for fics that have these two in a relationship where they get to used to one another too quickly. I loved evrything from Norman blushing in the car, not wanting to look at Blake naked, to being ashamed of being fingered. Delighful! It's always so much more erotic to me that way.
May I just say, the way you introduce Norman in the second installment is very well done. The way he's trying to get off of ARI is very sensible, gettig upset but still willing to do the 2-3 hour trip, regardless...Blake's concern was also becoming of him, I believed.
Probably one of my favorite Blayden scenes I've read- Blake walking into the shower with a tube of lube, then fingering him. :3 EROTIC MOTHERFUCKING SHIT. I also must give you BIG KUDOS for not forgetting how important lube is in anal sex. It always sort of erks me how writers have anal sex going on with little to no lube- you really need SOMETHING, even if it's just spit, in able to have anal sex. The more, the better for both. If they do mean to include it, it certaintly is almost never mentioned! Though it's a very sensual act- and I feel it should absolutely be written. The way he does it to Jayden, too, is also wonderful.
The sexxxx! It was so amazing, I've read this whole fic about four times already, and I still think it's so mind-blowingly hot!! Not to mention, very accurate. Sex is such an act between two people- a cooperation. Though so many simply just have Blake pound on him until he cums- so I was really, really surprised how realistic yet HOT this part was. Kudos!
You might want to post this on ff.net. I'm sure many would appreciate you for it. One of the best I've read! I really hope you continue. (and get more reviews, as well!) P.S. I'm very tired and it's very late...sorry for this crappy review. But know that I am VERY happy you wrote this! ;)