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I kinda want this story again... from Razer and Phoenix's point of view. Seriously, it seems like they have an entire story going on in the background this whole time. I would be so down to read it.

"Not boyfriends?" I have one response to Jak's line of denial there, and that can basically be expressed by the Road to Eldorado gif of Miguel and Tulio saying "Both? Both. Both is good." but with the words changed to "Boyfriends. Boyfriends, yes. Boyfriends it is.*nods*"

And okay. Damas just rocked the entire chapter with that toast. It was brilliant, perfect and so him. I knew he'd catch on before the boys even had a chance of figuring it out for themselves. I'm also glad that everyone seemed very happy about it and old men didn't have borderline rude things to say! Especially since Daxter couldn't help himself when it came to New-Years Jak Kisses. Showering his boys with love and affection and tablets. What a good daddy.

AND OKAY Running shoes. YES. yes yes yes. Of course I have news for these two, expensive customized running shoes ain't just something you buy someone who's not your boyfriend. I mean DAMMNN. They sound awesome. To the drawing board, maybe.

Speaking of the drawing board, though, SHOWER SEX. that is all I have to say on the matter. ;)

Except not because that really was hot. These things just keep getting more intense and I love how Jak has a newfound love of Frotting, lol!

The return of the Out takes are really good! Also the inclusion of the Sculptor and his Muse! I wish college would actually let you have a cat...Though I guess in some cases if they're therapy animals...

Anyway, Fantastic chapter, I adored it so much I apparently couldn't put off leaving a little review! <3

Ha! I knew they couldn't keep their relationship under-the-radar forever! XD Go Damas! And I knew the sculptor and his muse had to be in here somewhere... And there they are! Yay!

Also, J&D hotness is always FTW. Thanks for making my night. :3 Until later!

So the Samos and Daxter one-upping of insulting remarks begins! I wonder if Samos is going to continue on this path in the remainder of the vacation. But Jak again proves his worthiness as a friend with his apology and attempted derailing of the teeth conversation. Sweet heart. Damas is awesome as well, I'd love to see them all embroiled in a snowball war!

I am loving these chapters full of nods to TPL...Am I right in guessing that the puzzle Dax was playing with was inspired by the Power Cells? :D

AND OH JEEZ, Frotting. I need more of this, yes yes. I will sit here hoping for more on this subject. And I look forward to when they finally have the opportunity to be more...vocal, with each other in bed. ;3

This episode better continue in the next chap! No time skip! We need more hot Jakkie-Daxxie action! But, if you must time skip, then i insist that Jak and Dax kiss in the new year in full view of the family. That is the only acceptable conditions. Keep it up, pretty please!

P.S. Yes, indeed, Keira's texts were very funny.

P.P.S. How come ALL of the outtakes have vanished? I reread this and they're just all gone!

lol Yak-cows. I half expected the sculptor and a cat named Muse, too, but I guess there's only so much one can write. Especially when there's anarchy to write about, and pre-Christmas hotness. And post-hotness funniness. X3 I really DID expect Keira to climb that tree. Good thing for our boys it was too cold.

Until next time. ^w^

Awesome chapter, but I have to ask, have you yourself ever had braces before? There's no way Daxter would be able to get the brackets off with just needle nose pliers, not without breaking some of his own teeth. He'd be able to pull the bands and the wires off though.

It's been a while since I've checked back so it was nice to see, like, four new chapters. They were delicious. ^w^ Lots of lols and warm fuzzies to be had. Especially when the Mystery of the Missing Socks was solved. XD

Until we meet again! :3

Where are the outtakes? WHERE? They are the one constant in my unstable, tumbling world... dramatics aside, not bad for filler. I do hope you'll compensate for this chap having nothing but brief sleepy cuddles and a near-miss with something that would make sailors blush. Perhaps Samos will go off on some judgmental rant against Daxter and Jak defends him while outing them simultaneously and they make out in front of everyone? Or a practical demonstration of riding in the barn? Perhaps Jak presses Dax up against the window and Uncle sees them when he arrives? Whatever, it's your job to write this, not mine.

P.S. Seriously, keep the outtakes. They're 47.6% of the reason I even read this.

Aw, break poor Razer's heart. He was so looking forward to Daxter poking; had a nice sharp stick to do so with all ready to go and everything. But, let's face it, if I through Phoenix at him, we all know what kind of poking will be happening off screen (and a couple times on, you know, to keep things interesting).

I know how much this chapter has harassed you, but as usual, it worked out great. All the right levels of anxious and fluffy and I now have this thing in my head that Damas has a Tom Selleck mustache. It's horrible and horribly funny at the same time (now I want to know is he has the chest hair too, my god, what the hell is wrong with me??). And I do truly adore the turducken line--that's the most honest and sincere thing I've ever heard on the subject. I also share Keira's abject horror of tofurkey. I think I would show up regardless of an invite after that. Jak definitely owes her.

Keep going, dearest corgi. Fluff 'til your stumpy little heart can fluff no more. And remember to have fun. Don't worry about deadlines. This isn't going to run away from you and I won't let you forget how fun this is supposed to be. <>