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Progress made. Good progress. Very, very sexy- I mean, good progress. ^////^

roflmao "Show no mercy!!! >:D" I like the way Keira thinks. ;3 Although I hope those phones stay out of the wrong hands, but I worry about that kind of thing.

Anyway, keep up the great work! ^w^

Instagram photo??? (It's on Instagram for everybody to see....?)

But so cute. And hot. Totally cute. Love it. I am so happy when I see you've updated.

I'm not one to find random fanfiction, but Jak and Daxter being put in the college life, You pulled that off real well. I'm counting all the characters you put it and waiting to see how many more you'd put in, but Oh my god this is an amazing story!

Been a while! I actually missed the chapter before last, so I got to read both at once. And it was awesome! Sexiness, laughs and "awww" moments abound. Our boys are making such progress, especially Daxter. :3 Tho I wonder how he'll react to the little video he unwittingly starred in... Guess I'll have to wait and see. ;3

And Killer's outtakes still crack me up. XD

"The tablet camera filmed silently as the door clicked shut." Oh no. OH NO.
Awesome chapter, BEACH EPISODE NEXT :D Glad there's more to come.

Daxter will die from sheer embarassment. Then he will resurrect himself to smash that tablet with a sledgehammer, throw the parts into a blender, set that blender on fire, and toss the ashes into a weighted sack into a river. Unless Jak timely mentions how hot it made him and how maybe one day they can film the real thing.

Okay, Vin showed up. No hot Wastelander/Technician action, but i liked his outtake.

So help me, if you keep dark Eco and turn Daxter into an Ottsel just as he and Jak are about to do it, I will hire a hacker on the deep net to fry your hard drive!

Jk, lol... ?

Anyway, keep up the great work!

OH MAN. I was sweatin' for a minute this chapter, since there was mention of Jak making a "Live Ferret Feed", emphasis on LIVE. (so I confess that I went back like 3 times to make sure he wasn't already streaming and it was just a non-broadcasted-for-the-world-to-see test run featuring an unknowing Daxter) STILL THOOOUGH why I have a paranoid feeling that this recording is gonna bite them in the ass or fall into nefarious hands....Probably becuase Jak has not brought the subject up yet...

OMG JAK TELL HIM BEFORE THIS GETS OUT OF HAND SOMEHOW THIS IS HOW ANGST ARCS BEGIN (angst glutton though I am, BRING IT?!?)

Daxter smuggled an entire Cowboy hat without damaging it or Jak knowing what a little sneak thief. We knew his skills as a rogue were unmatched, didn't we?

Phoenix proves yet again that he is a goober. A precious goober that needs to be protected. AND OH GOSH VIN. Speaking of precious Tech cuties.

And Dax I think really would get a kick out of toys, obviously once he gets past the initial shock and embarrassment. Is he sure about the pink and sparkly ones though? They're not so bad... lol

Anyway great timing for the chapter, I am still sick(and therefore finding time to review promptly after reading!) so this was a fun thing to find/read as I silently squeak at Jak's forgetfulness over warning Dax. Much love!

I don't leave a review for this every chapter, like I really should. But I always get super excited when I get update alerts about this story, and it's always worth it. You're an excellent writer, the story is brilliant, and the characters are absolutely perfect every time. I don't know how long you intend this to be, but I hope it's still got plenty left to come :)

*fans self* Daxter's gettin' himself some now, dang! Poor little twitterpated thing that he is...I wonder when we're going to figure out that Jak returns the same warm fuzzies(denial denial denial be darned!) ...And Robin, even if it makes me a terrible person, I kinda want that "Ride 'em Cowboy" line to become literal, seeing as how there exists a canon cowboy hat. Now who's riding who, I guess would be dealer's choice... lol

*relishes* Aaaah, yes, a little sprinkling of everything; Sexy time, cute animal antics, plot advancement and continuity threads, and embarrassed boyfriend conflicts over Jak telling his bro about their bedtime tango. Perfect chapter!

I love how the talk between Phoenix and Jak was basically the Convening of the Painfully, Socially Oblivious. Razer and Daxter both know what's up with the other couple, but these two need a little more prompting(and coffee meetings).

And of course who can forget their furry sidekick, obviously he was dooking at them about the proper techniques of mounting from behind, right after the importance of common courtesy for third party room mates. And I still find it hilarious that Dax can't do anything while the furball is watching. Precious little cinnamon bun.

Well worth the wait, my dear!

Oh! That big moment when Dax is in the middle of his lustful throws with his new phallic toy.....until someone walks in on him....WHO COULD IT BE!?