rate_review Reviews

Finally! Another chapter! :D

Movies are Totoro and Laputa, castle in the sky, aight? Last one's one of my favourites, too.

I was totally expecting Jak to kinda ask Daxter to help him with his virginity, or at least walk into dax masturbation..but none D: You're killing me! But this kind of a teasing story is also great. Can't wait for the next chapter!

- your faithful&forever reader Rev

As I've been re-reading your whole archive again, I remember actually how much I love this one. Can't wait for the updates. There isn't a thing I don't adore about this.

So begins the sexual tension indeed. I wonder what it'll take to get Dax to succumb to it though...hope Jak doesn't end up pushing him too hard, or we'll be back at that shower scene again. Pretty sure the big guy will have it under control though, as long as he doesn't take too much advice from Jinx.


This story has been amazing so far, and has the potential to be your best AU yet I think. Especially with their later years in college as possible sequels. Kind of wish I could just read it all right now, but then again, I'd probably just gulp it all down rather than savor each individual chapter like I've been doing. Kind of a bad habit of mine when reading books.


*sigh*, I wish my college experience could have been more like this, but I didn't dorm so no luck there. Also, was that a bit of self-depreciating humor I spied there miss English major? Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter, as always. Hope you're having a nice summer so far.

Hey Thar, thanks for replying, and personally i would just love to see more of you writing stuff, SO EXCITED for UST, also i read that 'mateship' thing the totally wrong way and thought you were/are doing a foursome in the next chapter. also, so happy that Roll To Me is going to be worked on some more, because honestly, you, grimreaperchibi, and amaronith are my favorite slash writers for Jak and Daxter.

Also, i understand the not being able to update stuff, and am perfectly fine with you doing some one-shots between updates, just as long as it doesnt cut into any of your other stuff (hopefully Roll To Me and Keep Talking will be able to tide me over)

and one last thing "… he would probably never sleep again, either."
THIS NEEDS TO BE A THING

anyway, im just rambling now,
Keep on being a great writer, Tatty-bye!

I'm loving this so much!

I forgot to review the last chapter cause the site logged me out and I had to go find my login.

Can't wait to see this prank bit, sounds exciting!

If anything, I should be humbled by the fact that you take my suggestions as well as you do. So once again, I thank you for Torn's line about how it doesn't count until after college. Still want to beat him for the liberal arts jab, though. (Me? Defensive about my degree? Why do you ask? Besides, general education degrees are so much worse...)

Anyway, this was an absolute blast to read again. I was iffy on the whole Jinx thing, but you made it work so well. I officially have a jealous because I honestly couldn't make that work in my mind. I'm putting it on a shelf next to the Phoenix-voice jealous so that I may point to them if ever you need more moral support for what you're doing. Keep going! Onward to movie night!!

FLAGHGHGHGH, i had forgotten how long you take between updates. (what with updating Home once a week since it was pre-written, i wish you had more pre-written stuff, or one-shots of smut, either or) but I LOVE your stories. and am willing to wait if it means more of your slashy goodness.

-FrobNebulargh

Well, the cuteness level just went from 10/10 to 11/10. And while both the “sharing a bed to provide soothing and comfort” and the "thunderstorm related panic attack" tropes are common, they worked pretty damn well here. Not only was it completely unexpected (for me at least), but you also managed to explain how Dax managed to get through previous storms without Jak finding out. Heh, poor Jak though. I guess there is a possible downside when such situations arise.

Loving this story even more now, hope you're still having fun doing all this hard work for us.


(Also, I'm all for letting Jak go on a crusade to beat the tar out of some of Dax's foster parents.)

I am quite loving this so far, I spent a good few hours reading it! Keep up the amazing work! :D

... snerk.

pretty good chapter, beautiful way to handle the drama. You really knoow your stuff.

Also hilarious outtakes. Though now I Wonder if "foreign exchange student" is really a code for "ethical slut" or something. I mean, it HAS to stand for something, right?