rate_review Reviews

I'm so happy for another part. Reading it was joy as it is anytime I read your work. I really want to see what's coming up in the future for the boys. I think you are single-handily improving my reading rate because I burned through this newest chapter. Looking at the other comments everyone expected the smexing including me because it's usually the first kiss then the relationship explodes exponentially but I can be patient but I can't wait for the next part.

Wow, SOMEONE woke up on the wrong side of the bed (Razer). Wonder what happened? I'll have to check GrimReaperChibi's fic and see if there's clues there. :3

Poor little Daxter. Finally facing his man-crush, and he doesn't realize Jak feels the same way. Oh well, I'm sure they'll get around to it, soon enough. I'll be waiting to see how well getting an apology out of Razer goes.

Until then, laterz. ^w^

Finally, another chapter. Just right in time to be read while I have my breakfest. Turned out to be not the best idea, with all the going-to-puke-talk .... But besides that, a great chapter! Somehow I thought Jack would totally tell Daxter in some cheesy way he loves him, when Daxter talked about the kiss...oh an Jak would of course pin him to the door and naughty scenes would follow..or something. But no, the story goes on. I like that, the longer it takes for the two lovebirds to find each other, the more realistic and interesting it is. (even if my inner fangirl screams "c'mon where's the seeex?")

Can't wait for the next one. Still a big fan of your work.

Hilarious outtakes, cute mild plot development, TOO MUCH SEXUAL TENSION! What, is this going to be The Prince and Me and they have a heavy make-out in the barn during Thanksgiving to declare themselves... you know what? Knowing you, you'll have that happen, with Keira spying and Damas being a homophobe, just to make things 'out there'. Anyway, nice work, and don't hesitate to update!

Dear god...we've certainly made Razer out to be an asshole, haven't we? Well, let's be honest, he is right now. It's like his one constant attribute pan-universe/timeline. I admit no small glee on my part now for what I'm about to do to him. Though there may be a trace of regret for dragging Phoenix through this as well. Maybe after everything is said and done, Jak will appreciate the amount of restraint that went into shoving the poor redheaded waif into a closet. It's nice to see that they're smart enough to recognize that this was a little extreme, even for him. Do I dare say it...? People are starting to--no, nevermind. I'm not that brave yet.

See? Deadlines can be met. Good corgi, best writer. *hugs* Neko has absolute faith in your ability to continue forward. The Fans of Encouragement are at your disposal, whenever you need them.

Love the new chapter.
Wonder what sober Dax's reaction will be.

ERMAGERD I didn't realise I hadn't reviewed this. I am endlessly USELESS at reviews so I'll just spaz out now and say how HORRIBLE you are! UST UST UST RESOLVE THAT ST MAN.
I'm so impatient! I'll just run around in circles for a while instead.

Lol that end bit in the outtakes with Daxter freaking out, that so made me think of me and real world Daxter the other day when he saw a police car in the street with the lights on and two people were getting arrested and first he was getting super excited about it but then he remembered he had some weed in his pocket and he starts jumping to me saying "Oh shit there's weed in my pocket Jak, their gonna smell it and I'll get arrested! Jak! Jak!" and I just said like dead calmly "Stop freaking out about it and act bloody normal then they won't notice," still made me laugh a lot.

And the kiss was cute.

And #meep# the outtake with Erol, still sort of half waiting for that though.

Ah, so glad I caught back up on this story. :3 Can't wait to see the next day's reactions to the kiss. Also... JAK! Read the outtakes! Dax is gonna get beat up! Protect hiiiiim!!!

lol The party from J&D's POV. Cute. X3 Particularly the very end, in the bush. Poor Jak, being reminded that leaf piles are where spiders live. I'm surprised his screaming didn't attract the cops, again. XD lol

I can't wait to see what Jak does about that kiss. Will he think it was pure alcohol on Dax's part? Or will he think the alcohol just loosened Red up just enough. Like I said, can't wait. :3 Until later!