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August 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I'm way excited to make Erol into an absolute ass? Because I am. This is going to be so much fun... And yeah, next time Daxter wants to play it smooth, maybe the twit will do his research first. He totally desrved to get sick.
And somewhere across campus, Razer developes a sudden headache. "Two idiots are trying to have sex... Gott sei mir gnädig."
And somewhere across campus, Razer developes a sudden headache. "Two idiots are trying to have sex... Gott sei mir gnädig."
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August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
God dammit, now I'm going to be checking for updates every second now that you had to bring Erol back. I want to know what he's plotting! Either way, great chapter as usual!
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August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YES! Finally, ze smexiness! Can't wait to see where this goes! Keep up the fantastic work!
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August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why did you skip my review?
Makes me feel sad :(
Makes me feel sad :(
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July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
No oninonono nonononononononoooooo!! OMG i need more!!! My babies need to kiss! OMG i cant wait (seriosly i cant) for the next chapter update, i hope you update soon i love it! <3 you are an amazing writer and your story is brilliant and i have gotten so emotional over the cuteness of daxtar! OMG something needs to happen at this party....
Pleeeeeaae keep up the good work ad never abandon this story!
Pleeeeeaae keep up the good work ad never abandon this story!
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July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful. Simply wonderful! Every time I think I have a favorite chapter, you write a new one with new antics and the teasing and tension getting slowly better and aiming for that bulls-eye! Poor, mortified Daxter. Crafty, popsicle-sucking Jak. Seriously, popsicle teasing is the absolute BEST I don't know why. lol.
And Torn and Jinx's convo had me grinning like an idiot for our conversations of it on tumblr XD I love that they even have a bro-handshake! (and their out take was perfect for them. Absolutely. Jinx is such a little shit and will never let Torn forget it.)
Don't worry Killer, soon your humans will get together! and it will be glorious!(just be prepared for noises at all hours of the night, woops)
And Torn and Jinx's convo had me grinning like an idiot for our conversations of it on tumblr XD I love that they even have a bro-handshake! (and their out take was perfect for them. Absolutely. Jinx is such a little shit and will never let Torn forget it.)
Don't worry Killer, soon your humans will get together! and it will be glorious!(just be prepared for noises at all hours of the night, woops)
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July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
dam i want to read about errol getting daxter, but you only wrote about it in the first two chapters, does errol come back for daxter or is it all just jak and daxter now?
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July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Incredible!
You've outdone yourself this time. Completely and utterly loved this chapter. The way it started, what happened in the middle (at first I thought you were setting up Torn and Ashelin, then that curve ball!), and that ending (an evil Jak is a good Jak)! Not to mention the build up you planted for the next chapter. Just brilliant. And sexy. And funny. And creative.
Anyways, as I'm sure you can tell, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you're having a great summer so far, and keep writing these beautiful, beautiful stories of yours.
You've outdone yourself this time. Completely and utterly loved this chapter. The way it started, what happened in the middle (at first I thought you were setting up Torn and Ashelin, then that curve ball!), and that ending (an evil Jak is a good Jak)! Not to mention the build up you planted for the next chapter. Just brilliant. And sexy. And funny. And creative.
Anyways, as I'm sure you can tell, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you're having a great summer so far, and keep writing these beautiful, beautiful stories of yours.
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June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok so this is my review of Chapter 16 (because when posting a review from a phone it doesn't appear to actually work).
But by the time I got back on the computer to read CH16 again you'd posted CH17, so gonna do this review for CH16 and then read CH17 ideally soon (I had a quick skip through of it) and then post another one.
So yeah, there was one sentence that I felt should have had the word 'been' in it, I'll put it here with (been) like that in the middle of it;
Let Jak think he would have popped a boner if it had (been) anybody else rubbing his back.
Unless it is just me reading it as that then nevermind.
And then the other thing I added about was all the like thought bits of Daxter that you write in italics, they are so funny!
And then the final bit of this was what I wrote on the other review thing that I left here.
So now I'm all up to date.
But by the time I got back on the computer to read CH16 again you'd posted CH17, so gonna do this review for CH16 and then read CH17 ideally soon (I had a quick skip through of it) and then post another one.
So yeah, there was one sentence that I felt should have had the word 'been' in it, I'll put it here with (been) like that in the middle of it;
Let Jak think he would have popped a boner if it had (been) anybody else rubbing his back.
Unless it is just me reading it as that then nevermind.
And then the other thing I added about was all the like thought bits of Daxter that you write in italics, they are so funny!
And then the final bit of this was what I wrote on the other review thing that I left here.
So now I'm all up to date.
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June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
JAAAAAAKKK You know! You know he likes you! Stop putting it oooooofff! I have ferret-rage too, little Killer. I think Killer is the #1 shipper of this pair. :| Great work as always Robin, can't wait for next!