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Yay you updated I'm so happy. Can't wait to read more of this beautiful baby

Okay, it's official, this story has completely taken over my life… and I'm oddly okay with that.

Freakiness with Errol notwithstanding, THE most squeal-worthy chapter yet! They have ALLLLLLLLL break to try stuff out! And hey, you told me that there would be topping (even if who's first is quote "carefully guarded, alas"), so what's with this hesitance? And how long until they realize they're soul mates and go public? Geez, I thought things would get better once the sex started, but NOOOOOOOOOO. You are a terrible person, but I worship the fluffy yaoi cookies you bake for us, so you're simultaneously a nonterrible person. Like Schrodinger's author!

P.S. Keira hooks up with Tess and there's this whole 'what-do-ya-know' moment when Jak and her realize they unknowingly engaged in a lavender marriage. That or there's some massive explosion that tests their relationship and creates massive drama for the sole purpose of winding us up so we can grovel at your feet for make-up sex. If neither of these come to pass, then all my foreshadowing skills are useless and I'm never reading you again!

P.P.S. Just kidding... or am I?

P.P.P.S. How weird would it be if your chapter about Thanksgiving Day actually came out on Thanksgiving? It's like Inception!

Let's be honest here; there's no way Dax would take sex advice from Razer, just like there's no way Razer would be able to give said advice without wanting to strangle Daxter somewhere along the way. Jak might be able to survive long enough to get a handful of notes before our dear exchange student would start questioning when exactly he lost control of his life so badly. Knowing Phoenix, there might be an offer for a practical demonstration involved somewhere along the line and god know no one is going to be drunk enough for those shenanigans any time soon.

Also, thank you for including the "Sit on it and spin" line. Still my favorite from the games.

Is there going to be kissing soon? I feel like Daxxie needs to learn how to kiss.

I'm worried about what's going to happen with Erol though, can't wait for update, especially now it's getting steamy :D

Small note, but your reply for SpunkiSpirou you'll want to put in your next chapter or he won't actually see it.

Other than that its a great story, would you want to see the sexy parts acted out for reals with real people as Jak and Daxter? I sure would!

You hit it out of the ballpark again! I have to admit, I checked for this chapter pretty much every day since the previous one. Been a bit busy with a new job though, so sorry about the review being a bit late.

Anyways, I wasn't expecting Daxter to be that frank about it. Then again, I also wasn't expecting him to morph from cuteness overload to sexy beast. I really liked that he went and accused Jak of flirting with him, really fits his character and I don't see how he could have ignored it after that popsicle incident. And that blow job ending was hilarious, I don't know how you keep things so refreshing after having written so much already.

I think I might be looking forward to the next chapter even more so than I was to this one, which is pretty damn impressive. I see you've been working on Keep Talking though, so I'll at least have a reread of that (and probably Talk to Me) to keep me occupied for a bit. Thanks for working extra hard for us!

*cheers*

Aw, smooth move Daxxie! At least you got the ball rolling :)

I'm already dreading them getting found out...

Excellent as always Robin, keep up the great work <3

Ohh, Dax, that's what happens when you rely on liquid courage...in copious amounts. Poor dear, but at least he got somewhere with that shameless flirty blonde! That was a perfect blend of drunken hilarity, all-out sexiness(I do have a thing for wall kissing/making out/groping) and adorable coupley awkwardness. I wonder how quickly Daxter will feel up to trying out the smooching in the morning! Hopefully soon! Though even his kiss-dodging was quite cute.

Oh no, the Cheerleaders are going to be out for blood, now. And Erol....I got my eye on him. Always. *suspicious glare*

...Still fully in love with Daxter's outfit...I'm the same as Jak, I don't wear Skinny jeans or anything so I've never cared...but then Daxter did his thing and WOW. Skinny jeans are awesome shit now. lol.

Hmmmm i wonder wht erols planning hmmmm....

Also daxter sounds cute in his new outfit, also, i hope Kiera doesn't mind too much... I wonder if shes with tess........

I love room and board!! Just saying!

I dont really know what else to say, other than what if one time erol is with daxter again but this time jak doesn't turn up untill its too late...........

OMG im being mean to daxter