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May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love all your Hawke/Varric stories, but this one's one of my favorites! I'll admit that my favorite pairing will always be Hawke/Anders, but you make this relationship so believable, I just love reading about it!
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A great story here!
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent and hysterical. All Varric. Loved it.
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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story a lot. You do a great job of setting up the scene and making it feel natural. Some bits I particularly enjoyed:
"It was Varric’s idea to begin with her on top. Because he was so much bigger than her dildo, her slender old potion bottles, or any dead lover from Lothering had ever been, he said he wanted her to start slowly, setting her own pace at least until she was confident that she could take him inside her comfortably."
"Maker, she hadn’t even had to touch herself. Every part, inside and out, that she normally had to rub and tap and strain against her own practiced fingers was already contracting against his solid heat. She arched her back. Varric gripped her hips to hold her down and that only made it better, because there was no way for her to escape the hardness of him, filling her up completely."
"Varric laughed and resumed fucking her, much harder this time, until the bed shook beneath them, its dry joints creaking. As she wrapped her legs around Varric and bounced her hips against him, forcing him deeper inside her than she’d even thought possible, Hawke decided that she didn’t much care if the whole house was awake and listening. She needed this."
Lots of great detailed sex scenes while getting into the characters' heads. And the size kink will always draw me in. As I said, really enjoyed this and hope to see more.
"It was Varric’s idea to begin with her on top. Because he was so much bigger than her dildo, her slender old potion bottles, or any dead lover from Lothering had ever been, he said he wanted her to start slowly, setting her own pace at least until she was confident that she could take him inside her comfortably."
"Maker, she hadn’t even had to touch herself. Every part, inside and out, that she normally had to rub and tap and strain against her own practiced fingers was already contracting against his solid heat. She arched her back. Varric gripped her hips to hold her down and that only made it better, because there was no way for her to escape the hardness of him, filling her up completely."
"Varric laughed and resumed fucking her, much harder this time, until the bed shook beneath them, its dry joints creaking. As she wrapped her legs around Varric and bounced her hips against him, forcing him deeper inside her than she’d even thought possible, Hawke decided that she didn’t much care if the whole house was awake and listening. She needed this."
Lots of great detailed sex scenes while getting into the characters' heads. And the size kink will always draw me in. As I said, really enjoyed this and hope to see more.