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for Crimson Covered Souls

by BlueBastard

schedule May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holly. Shit. That's all i can say. that was an awesome story, from begining to (obviously not complete) end. I was just looking for a random sex story, but this honestly has to be one of the best stories i've read. Description is awesome, i like how you gave them both so much personality and such depth. most stories on this site don't have anything remotley near this complexity. It was awesome, and if i knew how to work my profile (i'm new, go figure) i would add this story as a favorite. I'm completly at loss for how well this was written.
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. Please, please, please update it soon. I love the way you write Charon and Ari's interactions. I love her leave-me-the-****-along mentality. The psuedo-sex scene was brilliant and steamy just like I like them.

I say again. Please update!
-MD
schedule October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I agree with FancyLadySnackCakes. More please!
person MarieRaine
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Epicness!! <3 I totaly agree give that girl a home run!! hope to see more soon >3<
person FancyLadySnackCakes
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
By god you are brilliant.

That - those two chapters - were just as hot as the other, and by hot I meaning burning. Charon is so un-fuck-ing-believably badass, and your Ari is one cool chickedy as well. If this is how good you are at writing dryhumping smut then I anxiously awaite the way you prose the home run. I honestly can say that it may kill me to not see more of this soon!