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I just checked to see if this updated, and it did! You're doing a really good job of it. I really like Neku and Joshua's interactions, they seem so in-character.

What's wrong with Joshua?! Is he just asleep, with Neku freaking out because he's never been around a sleeping partner (as they always woke up at almost the exact same time) or is it more serious like an injury from the fight?
I'd say call Mr.H. but I'm not sure if he can or if they can trace that. I hope Mr.H is ok. Well, if Joshua could handle them and Mr.H was better at it than he'd be alright. But with so many unanswered questions it's hard to say for sure.

Really wonder why these Angels are attacking... Especially so many! And why no one is stopping them? I mean, this has got to be against some Angel code right? Not even mentioning the Taboo noise.
Hope you'll continue soon! (cause cliffhangers are evil)

Love this story. The first genuine good TWEWY fic I've ever read since I finished the game a long long time ago :)
Please, do continue! Very interesting. I love how you added the stuff from the video game (the cafes, fashion brands, streets, and even how they enter the battle secuences!!). It's rare (at least for me) to find fics with stuff from the video game. Also the dialog! Everyone's good, especially thank you for reminding me how much I liked Beat's slang, lol!. As I said earlier, please do continue it's a great story. Lots of luck!

I love this story! I just finished completing TWEWY and I was dying to find some good fanfiction of it. I do hope that you finish this one someday, it really as my interest. :)

Ah, there are far too few views for this wonderful fic you've written, and far fewer reviews than there should be as well.
The character interactions are, in my opinion, as close to the dialogue from a fake, yet highly desired, BL-themed sequel as you could get. The only thing I didn't /quite/ like was how Neku's only response to the insufferable irritation that is Joshua is a punch to the face, and I feel like our favorite carrot-top should have more of a reaction to Joshua's kisses and other affectionate gestures, preferably in favor of continued behavior on Joshua's part. I'd love to see where you take this lovely tale from here, and Joshua's just sleeping... right?
Also, is there a description planned for this Cyril kid? I feel like I totally missed it if there was one... -runs back to reread-

And was that a mention of a Gravitation pairing I saw on your profile? I'll be crossing my fingers for fic on /that/, all right. :D

I like how you write the chracters' interactions - they're all in character (in my opinion). The only thing I didn't like much was the fact that the female enemy (Eliza, I believe?) acted pretty much like Uzuki. Other than that, though, this is a very good fic. I hope you write more.

I really like the dynamic you have going on between the two partners. You obviously thought this through. I'm really enjoying it.

Just wanted to let you know that I'm reading this and don't give up. I happen to enjoy this story so far. It's rare to find fics from this series.