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by TropicalFool

schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
eeps!!!
meanass fenris!
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I find this fascinating. I admit, I was more intrigued by Anders controlling of Fenris in the first two chapters, but Fenris's response is utterly appropriate. Cruel but appropriate, and interesting of course. Your detailing of the Qunari was also fabulous.

I am curious, however, about when this is set in the game. I know act II is when Anders sets the stuff but...is that enough time, considering what Fenris could tell Hawke about the things denied him as a slave, if you give him the first gift that is (purposefully avoiding spoilers). Or is Anders unaware of that fact, something Fenris is using to his advantage? A part of me thinks it is, which makes me both love and loath Fenris all the more.

I do love the fact that you're making me want to kill two of my favorite brooders every other minute. Bravo. Looking forward to the next.
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A fascinating story, exquisitely written. I'm intrigued to see where it all ends. I much prefer Anders/Fenris to Anders/Arishok, but still, I think the premise is believable and for me, anyway, frightening.
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn, this is a killer fic so far