rate_review Reviews

What a story, what a wonderful writer. Thank you for this.

This! This was amazing! This whole story was such an adventure! I've been reading and watching and waiting for this since you posted that amazing, catching first chapter! I have loved every single moment of this amazing ride! And though I am saddened that it's done I am soo relieved that it's done! I love it! You have the most amazing way with word choice! An the incredible way you've taken these characters and spun them up to be soo much more and yet still very much themselves! You are amazing! You have accomplished something flat out fantastic in this! I be rereading this and showing it off for years! Thank you for creating it! Thank you for posting it! Thank you so much for letting us read it! Good luck in everything you try! I can't wait to see whats next!

ALL OF MY FEELINGS!!!!!!!!!

Aww, I am now all warm and gooey inside! Such a nice ending for the boys. Even though we as readers/players know what happens after, it's still wonderful they're able to have moments like that now. And I know I've commented on this before, but you followed the game so well. Everything was woven in just perfectly with your own spin on things. Masterful, neko. Masterful.

I have seriously enjoyed watching this fic unfold. You did an excellent job with it! And I'm sorry for the whole Rule 39 thing. Really I am. You believe me, right...?

Truly amazing, I've followed this story from day one and loved every second of it, it's so beautiful.

*floats by in a bucket on a a wave of sap* I'll see you at the end~!

This is the best Jak fiction I have ever read. Your style, characterisation and mingling with the lore and nuances of the games make me jealous of your ability as a writer. Aaaand end gushing kiss-assery.

Derp-corgi apologizes for her forgetfulness. Shan't happen again, chief.

Now. I know I've shared a few thoughts, but I'll reiterate my favorite thoughts. This chapter is extremely well rounded. Sexy and action-packed all at once makes me a happy reader in many ways. The beginning is delightfully hot, and the ending is delightfully BA. I thank you again for not allowing Vin to die as per canon. He got a chance to show his own BA bravery! Go, Vin! *waves the Vin flag*

Anyway, you're in the thick of the action, now. I know it's a slippery slope to the end of the game, and you're doing wonderfully. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Aww! I absolutely love the ending. That's a great way for Jak to make up for being an ass. And really, Dax deserves to be carried for the awesomeness he just unleashed. You go, little redhead.

I still love how you're following the games with this storyline. It really adds to the whole thing. Can't wait for the next installment, as usual, even if it means things get hectic for our favorite duo. Cheers!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Augh, so so excited for this chapter you have no idea! The race! And the boys making up (and out)! And, okay, so my questions were mostly answered, but where is Widgit? ((Obviously I have some idea, having played the game before, but...))