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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Really enjoyed this :) Feeling somewhat inspired to continue on with a Krauser-fic now.
5/5!
5/5!
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..well, it isn't my sort of thing but it is very well written.
Your stuff generally is, I find. It's very easy to read and you paint a scene perfectly. I could visualise this in my head which may not sound like much but means your prose went straight to my imagination without having to mess around.
If I have to make a criticism, and I always try, it's Krauser's second penetration. I didn't realise he'd pulled out and I got a little puzzled.
That's it, that's all the bad things I have to say. I look forward to reading what else you come up with!
Fish
Your stuff generally is, I find. It's very easy to read and you paint a scene perfectly. I could visualise this in my head which may not sound like much but means your prose went straight to my imagination without having to mess around.
If I have to make a criticism, and I always try, it's Krauser's second penetration. I didn't realise he'd pulled out and I got a little puzzled.
That's it, that's all the bad things I have to say. I look forward to reading what else you come up with!
Fish