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for A Gift for Desire

by WotanAnubis

schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH fuckedy damn. That was amazing. Wow, I almost like Merryl now, almost. Sooo cute. You're an amazing writer, I hope you know. Word choice = so perfect, and tone and all... wow.

I mean, the only thing I'm really upset about is how DAMN SHORT IT IS!!! What's wrong with you, fool!??!?!?

Do you have another account I can use to track down some more of your delicious words? Please?
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I didn't think that Merril had a naughty side of her :) Nice!

person LegionPrime
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not enough Merril/F!Hawke. prefrences tho, i guess.

This was very good. i hope you do more with these two =)
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was certainly very nice indeed. I could've stood to hear more about Merrill and her four fantasy slavegirls, but what you wrote about her and the Desire Demon was very erotic.

I loved the mental image of Merrill playing with herself to the thought of the Demon, and introducing Hawke to her.