rate_review Reviews

I think your story is developing beautifully. I think it might be nice to occasionally see a little dialog from the rest of the party, especially characters like Wynn that analyze the Cousland/Alistair romance in the game. Most of the party members have something to say on the matter, so it might be interesting to put them in as well. Flipping perspectives in the story is an excellent touch. I have greatly enjoyed the first 5 chapters and would dearly like you to make the story go to the end of the origins storyline, maybe a flash forward with how Alistair visits Kirkwall in DA2. I understand how busy you are, I am in graduate school myself. So I will wait patiently for your next post in anticipation.

I love it so far! You're style of writing is phenomenal! Can't wait for more! :D

This is awesome, I loved reading it. Write more chapters! :D

;---; If you had posted this on fanfiction.net you would have had way more reviews. I'm in love with this story. I must admit, i check it daily. MOAR UPDATES PLOX.

so, the noble really can marry alistair?
cuz i've started to play as her just this last week and was wondering
i completed every other ending but this one
btw, i adore this story, thus far!

Good story so far. A few grammar errors, but not enough to take away from the plot.

Btw, Alistair's humor is epic win. This is coming from someone who chose to exile him, which was the hardest decision I've made in a game(Anders in DA2 nonwithstanding). Keep up the good work, there's never enough good Dragon Age anything.

It's really nice. I like the thought of sharing rooms with Alistair.^^

I personally liked the oneshot, but now I have discovered that I like this way better.

I have one gripe: I want to read more. Now. :)

Great start. And as an Alistair fan, I hope his dreams come true.

Ohh this sounds intresting! I'm adding this to my -check for updates- folder :)
Cousland gets too little loving these days!