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for Keep Talking

by sillyneko345

schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Jak. You should so know better by now. Nothing about Daxter is subtle, which means that if you want to get his attention, you have to run him over with train. In his defense, Daxter's been in a damn hurry since day one. Getting bowled over and lost in the mix is inevitable. Whatever happened to enjoying the moment? Going slow and getting used to being in a relationship? I'll quite being logical now and let you continue. Looking forward to where this goes.
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can't believe i haven't reviewed yet!

Jak being all shy and fearful of bottoming was cute, i'm surprised there wasn't a "i thought somebody was flaying a bird alive yesterday night here" comment from Bird Lady or something xD would've been funny-awkward.

Can't wait for next chap. Here's hoping a beach party ensues xD
person Kuromei
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lmao XD Yay! It's finally begun. X3

I can't wait for more, even though I will. ;3 Outtakes are gold, as always, btw. XD

Until later! ^w^
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude, totally been waiting for this! Sooo happy!!! 8D

Of course, maybe should have reread the first one, because I was kind of confused for the first few paragraphs. Hehe. Oops.
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*snickering* So so cute. and Poor Sculptor, man... how he must suffer for his art.