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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I come home from vacation and you have a nice shiny chapter up! *happy shuffle*
I laughed so hard at the "smokey", I don't even know why it's so funny, but it is!
Hmm, Daxxey getting some top time, eh? This is relevant to my interests. But then again, this whole section is, but this is more specifically relevant.
I laughed so hard at the "smokey", I don't even know why it's so funny, but it is!
Hmm, Daxxey getting some top time, eh? This is relevant to my interests. But then again, this whole section is, but this is more specifically relevant.
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG roflmao XD If only Razer knew that Dax spanked Jak with his spatula... Doesn't matter if it got washed right after, he'd burn it. X3
But uh oh. Drama is on the horizon? Ooooooh~! Delicious. >)
See you later. ^w^
But uh oh. Drama is on the horizon? Ooooooh~! Delicious. >)
See you later. ^w^
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And so the plot starts to thicken. Lurker pet is awesome, shower scene (consensual this time) was awesome, and reminding Dax that he owes Razor cleaning/handyman chores was hilarious.
Favorite part was probably Dax messing with Jak during the movie, although I am wondering if doing all that Ottsel Dax x Jak fiction is starting to bleed over into your Human Dax x Jak stuff...not that I mind one bit.
Looking forward to finding out what the main conflict is going to be in this arc. Loving it so far though. Happy writing, and have a great summer!
Favorite part was probably Dax messing with Jak during the movie, although I am wondering if doing all that Ottsel Dax x Jak fiction is starting to bleed over into your Human Dax x Jak stuff...not that I mind one bit.
Looking forward to finding out what the main conflict is going to be in this arc. Loving it so far though. Happy writing, and have a great summer!
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Shower scene! Comming out great, can't wait to see what Razor has in store for Daxxey!
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know the best part about these outtakes? You could totally put them in as part of the actual story, and it would totally work. Especially that last one. :D
Also, I can't wait to see what crap Razer puts Daxter through THIS time. I guess it doesn't matter, as long as Razer keeps giving out tips to Dax. Maybe he'll lend Dax the "Intermediate Moves" book. Work him up to advanced. Oh God, or what if JAK asks? I cannot wait to see where this story will go!
... Pft-hahaha!!! *snrk* Princess... BWAHAHAHAHAHAheeheehee... XD
Also, I can't wait to see what crap Razer puts Daxter through THIS time. I guess it doesn't matter, as long as Razer keeps giving out tips to Dax. Maybe he'll lend Dax the "Intermediate Moves" book. Work him up to advanced. Oh God, or what if JAK asks? I cannot wait to see where this story will go!
... Pft-hahaha!!! *snrk* Princess... BWAHAHAHAHAHAheeheehee... XD
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, holy damn. I really wish I could figure out why those two having sex in the bathroom was sooo freakin' hot. But it is, and I absolutely love it! *glomp hugs* Thank you!!! This has made me so insanely happy, you don't even know... I agree with Jak--let's just make it all amazing, and I'm sure you will. You've totally spoiled me so badly with this, by the way.
*BLUSH* And thank you for the plug. I don't think my writing's that amazing, but obviously my opinion doesn't matter in this case. My muse thanks you.
*BLUSH* And thank you for the plug. I don't think my writing's that amazing, but obviously my opinion doesn't matter in this case. My muse thanks you.
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lmao XD Oh, gawd. Loved it all. And Sig taking a Lurker dog as a pet? HA! He would go and do that, wouldn't he? X3
Outtakes are gold, as always. ^w^ Although I AM wondering how Jak will react when Dax has to play housekeeper for Razer. I can't remember if Jak knows about the little deals Dax made with him, or not... I might have to reread a certain something to refresh my memory. ;3
Until later! ^w^
Outtakes are gold, as always. ^w^ Although I AM wondering how Jak will react when Dax has to play housekeeper for Razer. I can't remember if Jak knows about the little deals Dax made with him, or not... I might have to reread a certain something to refresh my memory. ;3
Until later! ^w^
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May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The Mayor is a tightwad. I love this chapter so much! Poor Daxter. XD
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May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is the sound of me choking on my own laughters from the outtakes.
also, FINALLY you continue this. You left me hangin', that's not nice :( nah, jk, totally worth it.
i bet Jak is gonna go all jealous over Dax's "cleaning duty" and threaten bodily harm to Razier (possibly using Razier's own body). After all, he said so himself, that's what he does.
So basically now, Sig gets a pet, Keira gets a way back home, everybody has a new couch, and Razier gets the juicy retelling of the Demolition Duo's sordid new tales? That's totally something I'd love to see.
also, I'm feeling self-conscious. As always ya make me want to write (I even bought Jak II so I don't have excuses like "not knowing the setting") but the only thing I feel comfortable writing as of now is basically a mopefest, and I hate those -.- Apparently I do angst better than fluff, but I like fluff better than angst, and this impasse is eating me up xP.
And yet, I don't know why I just typed all that in this review. Non-sequitur rules!
(yea yeah, nice way of keeping it fresh by adding variables, and delightful of you to keep the details from TtM and work 'em in here and yadda yadda. You're good. You know it. I'm bloating your ego like a pufferfish. Love the story, though now I wonder if Jak will be as, let's say, flexible as he seems to be in the games (wink wink). Seriously, he's like always spinning on dangling ledges and stuff. I bet if the whole "savior-of-the-world-twice-over" gig doesn't work out, he can always join a circus)
so yeah, g'night and hope to see you keeping this up soon!
also, FINALLY you continue this. You left me hangin', that's not nice :( nah, jk, totally worth it.
i bet Jak is gonna go all jealous over Dax's "cleaning duty" and threaten bodily harm to Razier (possibly using Razier's own body). After all, he said so himself, that's what he does.
So basically now, Sig gets a pet, Keira gets a way back home, everybody has a new couch, and Razier gets the juicy retelling of the Demolition Duo's sordid new tales? That's totally something I'd love to see.
also, I'm feeling self-conscious. As always ya make me want to write (I even bought Jak II so I don't have excuses like "not knowing the setting") but the only thing I feel comfortable writing as of now is basically a mopefest, and I hate those -.- Apparently I do angst better than fluff, but I like fluff better than angst, and this impasse is eating me up xP.
And yet, I don't know why I just typed all that in this review. Non-sequitur rules!
(yea yeah, nice way of keeping it fresh by adding variables, and delightful of you to keep the details from TtM and work 'em in here and yadda yadda. You're good. You know it. I'm bloating your ego like a pufferfish. Love the story, though now I wonder if Jak will be as, let's say, flexible as he seems to be in the games (wink wink). Seriously, he's like always spinning on dangling ledges and stuff. I bet if the whole "savior-of-the-world-twice-over" gig doesn't work out, he can always join a circus)
so yeah, g'night and hope to see you keeping this up soon!
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The long awaited sequel is off to a great start! Nice to see it pick up right where it left off. I've been wondering how this storyline was going to progress since you mentioned there being a sequel, and I can't wait for the next installment to see how the Demolition Duo are going to play it back in the garage.