errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
roflmao Yup, cat's out of the bag, now. Think Keira will let me borrow her tire iron to make a few points of my own, if I have to? *smiles evilly at Torn*
"Bonding" with Razer... lmao I love how he and Dax just keep jabbing at each other. XD Back and forth, like a verbal tennis match.
I can't wait to see the next chapter. *wriggles like a puppy* Especially since, you know.... ^///////w///////^
Oh, and the outtakes ROCK, as always. "Don't forget the spatula! :3" HA! XD
"Bonding" with Razer... lmao I love how he and Dax just keep jabbing at each other. XD Back and forth, like a verbal tennis match.
I can't wait to see the next chapter. *wriggles like a puppy* Especially since, you know.... ^///////w///////^
Oh, and the outtakes ROCK, as always. "Don't forget the spatula! :3" HA! XD
schedule
February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for Dax and Jak! Jak being submissive is so rare in fanfiction, especially with Daxter as partner...*Sigh* Please continue story?
schedule
December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You just introduced phoneless phone sex to the Jak and Daxter universe. It. Was. HOT.
I'm surprised Jak was able to resist...perhaps Daxter really is teaching him too well. Also surprised that Jak is still alive after his meeting with Raine, although I don't think Daxter's meeting with Razor is going to go nearly as well.
Anyways, loved the chapter (as always!), seeing Dax run off in a fit of jealousy was hilarious as that's usually Jak's purview. Really getting some menacing vibes off of Razor though, hope he doesn't rough Dax up too much (kind of for his own sake, since if Jak finds out...).
I'm surprised Jak was able to resist...perhaps Daxter really is teaching him too well. Also surprised that Jak is still alive after his meeting with Raine, although I don't think Daxter's meeting with Razor is going to go nearly as well.
Anyways, loved the chapter (as always!), seeing Dax run off in a fit of jealousy was hilarious as that's usually Jak's purview. Really getting some menacing vibes off of Razor though, hope he doesn't rough Dax up too much (kind of for his own sake, since if Jak finds out...).
schedule
December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was sooo happy when i did my bimonthly check of your profile and saw this story was updated! I can't wait for the next part and this one was too short! I know this story is just going to be as much torture as waiting for talk to me, and definitely waiting for them to finally get down with it. I love your Jak, his personality is perfect, and just how I imagine it from the games. Can't wait for the next installation. Keep up the good work. Kcd
schedule
November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Pfffftttt!!, xDDD loolololo o my god, I can't tell you how hilarious this chapter was ! Though, I didn't expect to see Ashelin do something like that .__. Oh well!! Poor Daxxie though, getting all jealous and having a hissy fit xD
schedule
November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Zomg, Daxter's little 'story'? That was good. Can't wait 'till the real thing. :3 Although, I am suddenly becoming worried about the Razer thing. Don't hurt Daxxie, Razer. :(
And bad Princess! No more Deluxe TV packages for you!
And bad Princess! No more Deluxe TV packages for you!
schedule
November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol Poor Daxter. I'd totally want to kick Ashelin's ass, too. Then again, she'd probably kick mine right back, once the surprise wore off. XP But it's the thought that counts, right?
Now, now, what does Razer want? Hopefully it's just to chew out Daxter for derailing his plans of getting laid. REALLY hope it's just that. Other possibilites include bodily harm upon a certain redhead, after all. :(
See you later!
Now, now, what does Razer want? Hopefully it's just to chew out Daxter for derailing his plans of getting laid. REALLY hope it's just that. Other possibilites include bodily harm upon a certain redhead, after all. :(
See you later!
schedule
November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How in the world I never managed to review the last chapter, I'll never know and leaves me very ashamed. Could've sworn I had, but that's probably what I get for swearing, right? Neko apologizes.
Moving on! I think it would be completely appropriate at any point in the near future for Ashelin to get beaten with anything that will leave painful, lasting bruises. So not cool to kiss someone else just to make your current toy jealous, *especially* when said toy is doing everything you want him to do anyway. Couldn't just make a lame excuse to disappear for a minute and have a quickie in the broom closet, could you? Nope, gotta kiss the oblivious blond. Daxter's got more self-control than I, because I would have kicked her ass back to Haven via Aeropa and the Underworld if I'd had to sit quietly through something that.
So...um...am I the only one craving BBQ now? Sig, you cook your heart out for me any day! Who needs a sense of taste anyway??
Moving on! I think it would be completely appropriate at any point in the near future for Ashelin to get beaten with anything that will leave painful, lasting bruises. So not cool to kiss someone else just to make your current toy jealous, *especially* when said toy is doing everything you want him to do anyway. Couldn't just make a lame excuse to disappear for a minute and have a quickie in the broom closet, could you? Nope, gotta kiss the oblivious blond. Daxter's got more self-control than I, because I would have kicked her ass back to Haven via Aeropa and the Underworld if I'd had to sit quietly through something that.
So...um...am I the only one craving BBQ now? Sig, you cook your heart out for me any day! Who needs a sense of taste anyway??
schedule
November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please please, hurry and update. Great story so far, great sequel to one my fave jak/dax stories. You are my favorite writer for this pairing. I've read everything you've posted here and on ff.net. so please, i can't wait!!!
schedule
October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally got around to reading it, and I'm glad I did.
Wasn't really expecting the two to make such a mess on Razor's furniture. Kind of makes you feel sorry for the guy (although I gotta admit that I probably wouldn't mind finding the Demolition Duo making out on my couch). At least the rest of his house is nice and clean.
Loved seeing more of Jak's submissive side, as well as how clumsy he can be when spying on certain redheads. Characterization and grammar were spot on as usual, and dare I say the lemon is getting even steamier.
Anyways, loved the chapter, and can't wait for the next update!
Wasn't really expecting the two to make such a mess on Razor's furniture. Kind of makes you feel sorry for the guy (although I gotta admit that I probably wouldn't mind finding the Demolition Duo making out on my couch). At least the rest of his house is nice and clean.
Loved seeing more of Jak's submissive side, as well as how clumsy he can be when spying on certain redheads. Characterization and grammar were spot on as usual, and dare I say the lemon is getting even steamier.
Anyways, loved the chapter, and can't wait for the next update!