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September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, yes! I never thought I would see this story updated again after so long! ^.^ I just decided to come back and read your stuff again out of a whim and then I see this new chapter! *unintelligible squeals* and as always, it's as wonderful as everything else you do! *showers story in love*
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March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't going to review this due to being in a rush (even more so as I just couldn't leave until I'd finished the last chapter!) but I just couldn't pass on through without saying how much I adore this fic.
The characters fit their personalities and the intimacy between Jak and Daxter is just that - intimate. No over sexualisation, rather they feel more genuine and in turn, makes them a lot more believable and draws you in.
I hope you continue this story, I would love to see the reactions of the others to seeing Jak and Dax together now they're official. Even if you don't, best of luck with any stories you write in the future, you clearly have a talent for it.
The characters fit their personalities and the intimacy between Jak and Daxter is just that - intimate. No over sexualisation, rather they feel more genuine and in turn, makes them a lot more believable and draws you in.
I hope you continue this story, I would love to see the reactions of the others to seeing Jak and Dax together now they're official. Even if you don't, best of luck with any stories you write in the future, you clearly have a talent for it.
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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I thought this was gonna be the make-up sex chapter, but it turned out to be something rather unique I think. Really loved the descriptions and imagery in this one, especially that of a moonlit Sandover, with the two gliding over the ocean waves. It was a nice peaceful break I think.
As always, looking forward to the next chapter. I'm guessing that one will have a lot of action, seeing as how you had to split it off from this chapter.
(Er, there appears to be something wrong with the review system. I'm logged in, but this is still gonna come up as an anonymous review :S .)
As always, looking forward to the next chapter. I'm guessing that one will have a lot of action, seeing as how you had to split it off from this chapter.
(Er, there appears to be something wrong with the review system. I'm logged in, but this is still gonna come up as an anonymous review :S .)
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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh you updated :D So good
I was worried you'd stopped writing, and now I'm super excited for Room and Board update too :D
I love the little outtakes at the end of each chapter. You have a great writing style, mixing laughs and squees and that essential bit of smut. Keep up the great work - I'm already looking forward to the next updates, I love your stories :)
I was worried you'd stopped writing, and now I'm super excited for Room and Board update too :D
I love the little outtakes at the end of each chapter. You have a great writing style, mixing laughs and squees and that essential bit of smut. Keep up the great work - I'm already looking forward to the next updates, I love your stories :)
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June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I love this story! The outtakes for chapter 6 were great. they really cheered me up (was having a bad night, still am, really...)Screw Roll to Me! Update this again!!!!! I'm sorry, I just am not into *that* other pairing. Oh, and, near the end, Jak's old man should SOOOO walk in on them. *snort*
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*HEARTS*
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April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think Razer might have a bit of a soft spot for poor Daxxie. Either that or he's just completely given up at this point.
Anyways, chapter was a good bit of fun. Loved Keira's outburst, and that Jak and Dax's secret wasn't so secret (even if the others took it as a joke). Also, was that a Dragonball reference? Specifically, Lunch?
Loved Daxter's timidness when Jak showed up, even if it was partly the drink talking. We haven't really seen him this drunk since the first chapter have we? Hope Jak can make it home without him falling off.
Hope you have an easier time with the next chapter, and sorry it took so long for me to notice this one after you updated it.
Anyways, chapter was a good bit of fun. Loved Keira's outburst, and that Jak and Dax's secret wasn't so secret (even if the others took it as a joke). Also, was that a Dragonball reference? Specifically, Lunch?
Loved Daxter's timidness when Jak showed up, even if it was partly the drink talking. We haven't really seen him this drunk since the first chapter have we? Hope Jak can make it home without him falling off.
Hope you have an easier time with the next chapter, and sorry it took so long for me to notice this one after you updated it.
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March 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this was just what I needed. I just got done reading the latest chap of 'room and board' and the smexy is heating,up over there too. I likes! Oh man, but another cliffy? You're cruel, man, just cruel. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts when they get back to base. Lmao. It was so cute when Jak just blurted it out abhout his 'boyfriend' I thought id die. And you are actually making me a Razer fan, which id never thought would happen. U should write a threesome with him and jak and dax.
Can't wait for the next chap.
Kcd
Can't wait for the next chap.
Kcd
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March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh boys, you two are SO CUTE. Seriously, if this was a romantic comedy, I would watch it every week. *heart!*
Another wonderful chapter, as always~
((Razer and Daxter are totally bros now - the seduction didn't happen, therefore they are now at the brofault. Yes brofault. It's a word.))
((no it isn't.))
Another wonderful chapter, as always~
((Razer and Daxter are totally bros now - the seduction didn't happen, therefore they are now at the brofault. Yes brofault. It's a word.))
((no it isn't.))
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March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know, I never cared much for Razer before I met you. Now, everything I had found annoying has become endearing. So I blame you for the dilemma I currently face.
I feel very bad for him for having to deal with Jak and Dax. Those two and their--let's be kind--issues, would try the patience of anyone. I'm all for their relationship and *I* want to beat them for making this waaaay more difficult than it needs to be. Granted, it's them, and the hard way is the only way, but that's neither here nor there. As far as I'm concerned, however, Razer is now automatically qualified for sainthood at this point for dealing with the situation and them with as much grace and understanding as he has. And yet, I find his pain funny and wish to torture him more. He has set himself up for this whole mess and completely, utterly deserves everything that is coming his way (even if the pancake thing was a bit much).
In any case, the boys had better get their butts in gear before he shoots them, thus ending all their problems once and for all. And if Razer doesn't, I just might.
I feel very bad for him for having to deal with Jak and Dax. Those two and their--let's be kind--issues, would try the patience of anyone. I'm all for their relationship and *I* want to beat them for making this waaaay more difficult than it needs to be. Granted, it's them, and the hard way is the only way, but that's neither here nor there. As far as I'm concerned, however, Razer is now automatically qualified for sainthood at this point for dealing with the situation and them with as much grace and understanding as he has. And yet, I find his pain funny and wish to torture him more. He has set himself up for this whole mess and completely, utterly deserves everything that is coming his way (even if the pancake thing was a bit much).
In any case, the boys had better get their butts in gear before he shoots them, thus ending all their problems once and for all. And if Razer doesn't, I just might.