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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the story
I would love to see more chapters but maybe add some more detail to what people are wearing and how they act
I would love to see more chapters but maybe add some more detail to what people are wearing and how they act
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March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great pairing, was really hot until the pissing stuff and Shepard mindlessly giving away her identity. Your general writing style would benefit from some polish. 3/5
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was so hot to see Jane getting humiliated, tricked and pissed on like that. I'm looking forward to seeing some more of this brilliant story.
If you'd have me, I'd like to offer my services as a beta-reader. I could comb over your work for any errors you may have missed, give you a few tips, and maybe tweak the story for the better. If you're interesting in working with me, hit me up at theirishapple@gmail.com
Your fan,
Alexandra
If you'd have me, I'd like to offer my services as a beta-reader. I could comb over your work for any errors you may have missed, give you a few tips, and maybe tweak the story for the better. If you're interesting in working with me, hit me up at theirishapple@gmail.com
Your fan,
Alexandra