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for Lara Croft's Sheep God Trials

by JayDee

schedule May 7, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Fascinating in that strange trainwreck sorta fashion.

person anoanon
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sick! But in a good way
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow! so fucked up - so original - so funny!

how can people not see the funny side!!!

loved it!!!
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Good setup and impressive the way you managed to cram so much story information into a few paragraphs. But everyone knows that the world's most notorious sheep-fuckers are the Welsh - Aussies don't even come in a close second - so it should have been set in Wales imo.
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you lately how much I love your prompt responses? No? Well, then. I love your prompt responses! This was clever, witty and downright fun! And you ended it with a perfect moral!
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
whaaaaat? Lame people rated this as low as a 3? ppppppftt! GET A SENSE OF HUMOR PEOPLE!

I LOVED THIS! *dances around happily* ahahahahaha! Lara Croft turned into a sheep. xD You`re good at writing, I liked the way you described things. Detailed, but not too detailed. mhm.. Short but to the point.
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First, let's get this out of the way: Sheep god? "Baaaaaaaw down before your god or I'll ram ewe!" Silly as it sounds, you really don't want lambasted by it. (I'll stop at two.)

Anyway, Lara doesn't ever get a break from you, does she? The set up made sense, and your description of her transformation, especially the wet cracking, really creeped me out, so that's a great job there. Of course the little jokes were a nice way to take the edge off, "inside her tenderloins" especially.

I definitely won't be counting sheep tonight though. Yeesh! (but in a good way)