rate_review Reviews

And they say romance is dead.

That's quite an intense wet dream, and so good that it attracted some waking fun. The set up went fast but was easy to follow, since dispensing with details about let me ignore that kind of stuff. The terrific detail an full intensity of the Scout's dream were played out fantastically, and you even threw in some nice hints with the wording to avoid that "It was all a dream?" feeling. (Yeah, I didn't even look at the title before reading it — seeing your name on a story is enough. :))

It was nice to see it ended with some raised curiosity as well.

Oh, excellent! I always have a warm, sniffly-happy moment when a young man's dreams come true... especially dreams like that!

Favorite line, which had me laughing like mad... "He thought of the Soldier’s lunchbox more often than the Heavy thought of Sandvich." Killed me utterly! Nice sly humor throughout, and lots of sex, and one happy reader!

Excellent read. I enjoyed the, "Tighter than a Scottish foxhole" line.