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February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Cute and fuzzy meets angsty and romance. All it needed was a little adventure/action to make it perfect! Not that it wasn't, just...I like action with my other genres, and not just action under the sheets, lol. Great story though!
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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. This was amazing.
1. LOVED the last line haha
2. I really like how you made Jak all pissed about how everyone treats Dax 'cuz you don't see him taking that viewpoint in many fics so it's an awesome change and a great way to look at things.
3. Dax pulling the gun on that guy not only made me laugh but also made me cheer 'cuz Dax is tough and although he can be scared at times he still isn't a baby and I love that you didn't write him as one.
All in all, great fic I loved it.
1. LOVED the last line haha
2. I really like how you made Jak all pissed about how everyone treats Dax 'cuz you don't see him taking that viewpoint in many fics so it's an awesome change and a great way to look at things.
3. Dax pulling the gun on that guy not only made me laugh but also made me cheer 'cuz Dax is tough and although he can be scared at times he still isn't a baby and I love that you didn't write him as one.
All in all, great fic I loved it.
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What can I say, fantastic story and one HELL of a sex scene. And it wasn't just the physical descriptions that kept me reading, but I think of all the J&D fics I've read, you really captured the deep-rooted affection between the two that most other authors go for but can't quite grasp. Please write more.
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February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for posting this, it was an excellent read! Very well-written, I must say. The emotion and dynamics between the guys were pretty spot on, as well. If Daxter can do half of what he does in-game, getting slung around and caught on fire and what have you, of course he is more than tough enough to enjoy a little rough love from Jak on the cusp of dark eco-mode. And I did like that he actively does enjoy it, the biting and scratching, in more than a "it's tolerable because it makes Jak feel better" way. Maybe next time he should give Jak a little nibble of his own...
Anyway, thanks again! It's wonderful to have such great new stuff to read for the fandom! I do hope you'll share again if/when you have more.
Anyway, thanks again! It's wonderful to have such great new stuff to read for the fandom! I do hope you'll share again if/when you have more.
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February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was most excellent! A perfect perfect way to end my day. *glee* You have such a great grasp of the boys, and I was grinning like an idiot through the whole thing. (Plus, it was totally hot and biting is one of my kinks...) Excellent work! I certainly hope to see more from you.