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by sillyneko345

schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Torn drunk, huh? I'd pay good money to see that... No, wait, I'm working on something else, no more new ideas. You've opened the floodgates, just so you know. Between my muse and you, I'm gonna be busy for a while.

I can't believe Jak tied him to a lamp post and left him out in the open like that. Well, scratch that, I can, I just don't want to. I want to believe (very desperately some days) that he's smarter than that. Strange animal + large open area - any sort of freedom = disaster. Daxter has the worst luck, too, which doesn't help anything either. And the bastard who thought he'd get rich quick totally deserves to have a broken arm. And a leg. And maybe a few teeth. Jak's got a lot to make up for; get your act together boy! Pamper that ottsel! He more than deserves it after a stunt like that.
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been chuckling all day over your "more ink on his face than would be found in the average stationary set." I don't know why; probably because I'm both a writer and a tattoo enthusiast currently having quite a bit of ink being put down right now myself. It's stuff like this that really makes me love your writing so much. I just adore your style!

There's a part of me that wants to look at Torn and go, "Are you not paying attention? They wander around the whole city, jacking zoomers, blowing shit up, having the ever odd run in (literally) with a KG patrol, and yet said patrols don't seem to be any more inclined to pick them up. Did you really need to push the leash thing?" Yeah, yeah, I know, me and my continuity issues are messing with your plot point again. Ignore me and carry on! Please!
person TheAnonThatGotAway
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You, I like you and all that you do. Now I summon you from the depths if whatever void you reside in to write faster and amuse me so.
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this fic got me "d'aaaaaaaaaw!"

I love you and hate you and want to write a J&D fic and want to play the last game I bought for my DS. So yeah, you make me conflicted. I'll curse you and worship you and build you a shrine and rain fiery death on it and...

Yeah, I think you get it. I can't wait to see this continuing.

(and yeah, Torn had it coming xD)
person Ezeku
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dax biting Torn?

/Yes/.

I adore you for this, seriously. :D A lot of people try and fail to work the whole "Daxter is Jak's pet" into a plot worth reading, but this seems like it has an assload of potential. I hope this one gets updated quick; I can't wait to see where you take it from here. C:
person Kuromei
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Duuuuude... lmao XD He bit Torn! And yes, the Tattooed Wonder DID have it coming. X3

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. So much can happen (good AND bad.) I'm almost on the edge of my seat just thinking of the possibilities. X3

Until later. ^w^
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heeee! Oh Daxter, life IS unfair, but you've got a hotass like Jak to make it better.