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*big grin* "Best-friend-with-official-benefits," huh? I like the sound of that. I like it lots.

Time to capitalize on those benefits, I'd say. Wouldn't you? ;D I can't wait to see what ensues! XD

Updaaate updaaaate, oooh it's an updaaate! (xD)

What else is there to say? You're still awesome, your updates still make my day whenever they come, and I still wish there were more authors like you in this fandom. Rock on.

Yay for awkward teenage admissions of lust! For two people who usually communicate so well, they don't have a clue. I totally loved Jak's "...if you...if we, uh...yeah?" Real smooth move there. You deserve to be embarrassed by letting that line slip out. I know, give the boy some slack, he hasn't had to express things like that before. If you've had enough time to fantasize about climbing back into bed with someone, though, you've had enough time to think of a slightly better way of asking. But this is Jak; we don't ask such things of him.

I'm hoping for a steamy bathroom scene! (In which case you'd totally be justified just saying they're lots of steam in the room and never do anything sexy.)

And you're not an idiot, you're just a geek. Which is almost as bad sometimes, I admit... Would it make you feel better to know I got the mushroom reference and will probably giggle over it for a while?

Dude, it's creepy how addicted to your writing I am, for real. XD I adored this chapter; over-protective!Jak for the ever-loving win. I can't wait for you to post the next one!

I said before, but you're seriously the only person I can stand readin' JakxOttsel!Dax from. XD I just finished up the chapter and I already want the fourth one. Keep the awesome updates comin'!

LET THE SEXY COMMENCE! And I'm serious about having a Torn-punching scene in this. Or maybe have Tess chew him out after daxter relates the whole sad story to her in an attempt for snuggles and free booze. Or something. I am seriously looking forward to the next chapter XD

Yay, another story from my favorite J&D author! :D Rock on. Your characterization is awesome as usual. Glad to see more ottselfic coming. It makes my dirty perverted little heart happy.

Poor Daxter. That really sucked. But, again, Jak will make it better. Right after he punches Torn in his stupid tattooed face.

leave it to Jak to have inappropriate thoughts in public..

Anywho, nice chapter (as usual). Poor Dax is having a rough day. Hopefully good ol' Jak will make it up for him, If You Know What I Mean...

And.... Ooh, it's snowing! (randomm babbling)

Uhm... Have a nice day and continue Keep Talking. Because you want to. Like I want to build you a shrine. And rain fiery death on it (don't worry, it's fireproof)

Awwwww~ Poor Dax. First the ice cream thing, then some punk-ass kids thinking they can make a quick buck. Good thing Jak heard the scuffle. ^w^

lmao Little shits deserved to have the piss scared out of 'em. XD

Yeah, I'd say Dax needs a pick-me-up. But will he go for what I think Jak has in mind? Out of his rut, he might, or he might not...

Yay! More suspense! XD I can't wait. ^//w//^