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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Congrats on the graduation! Feels great, doesn't it? {Insert fist bump here.} Finally, someone I know who's also an English Major... Wait. Graduated Saturday? Um, do you mind if I ask were from? 'Cuz I think I'll have a small world moment if the answer's Idaho State...and a minor heart-attack, but we should totally hang out! (Be prepared for an awkward email from a Satel Acheron, because I really do want to talk to someone other than science majors...)
Anyway, back to the point at hand, you have no idea how long I've been waiting for this chapter update. Oh holy damn, Jak's hot when he gets all dominant like that. Makes me all squirmy and grin like an idiot. This was a complete and total "Hell yes!" moment for me that I apparently needed. And that little tease in your endnotes, so not fair! Now I really want to write that little idea that's circling around in my head, but I feel like I'm stealing your idea. That whole allowed to make request/demands isn't really helping either. I may have to do it anyway and just gift it to you.
Until then, I eagerly await my upcoming shower scene and will continue working hard to keep you inspired. Least I can do for someone who's been so nice to me.
Anyway, back to the point at hand, you have no idea how long I've been waiting for this chapter update. Oh holy damn, Jak's hot when he gets all dominant like that. Makes me all squirmy and grin like an idiot. This was a complete and total "Hell yes!" moment for me that I apparently needed. And that little tease in your endnotes, so not fair! Now I really want to write that little idea that's circling around in my head, but I feel like I'm stealing your idea. That whole allowed to make request/demands isn't really helping either. I may have to do it anyway and just gift it to you.
Until then, I eagerly await my upcoming shower scene and will continue working hard to keep you inspired. Least I can do for someone who's been so nice to me.
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No matter how many times I read this, it always brings a smile to my face. I am kind of sad to see it end tho. Ah well. Loved it!
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. GAWD. O///////////////o Good thing I'm sitting in front of the window fan, because I just got the vapors. XD *tugs on shirt collar*
lmao Torn's not getting his stuff back. XD With good reason, too! Serves him right, I'd say. ^w^ Besides, the leash and collar have better things to do than just sitting in a drawer. Like helping Jak and Daxter get it on. I like that thought. X3 *blushes*
Congrats on the graduation! I'd give you digi-cookies, but all I have are the tracking kind. XP (Little fuckers.) So please accept this hug from a stranger. *hug*
Until later! ^w^
lmao Torn's not getting his stuff back. XD With good reason, too! Serves him right, I'd say. ^w^ Besides, the leash and collar have better things to do than just sitting in a drawer. Like helping Jak and Daxter get it on. I like that thought. X3 *blushes*
Congrats on the graduation! I'd give you digi-cookies, but all I have are the tracking kind. XP (Little fuckers.) So please accept this hug from a stranger. *hug*
Until later! ^w^
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, things heated up pretty quickly there. Nice to see Jak loosening up and getting into character more. Wouldn't be any fun if Daxter had to do all the pushing.
I'm not sure what I want to read more next, the next chapter of this, or the next chapter of Keep Talking. Either way, you're still doing an incredible job with the writing quality, and continue to innovate with each new story. I hope you're having as much fun writing these as we do reading them.
I'm not sure what I want to read more next, the next chapter of this, or the next chapter of Keep Talking. Either way, you're still doing an incredible job with the writing quality, and continue to innovate with each new story. I hope you're having as much fun writing these as we do reading them.
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wait! That's it?? That can't be it! I mean, that was hotter than it had a right to be and now we have to jump scenes? I know the bedroom's up next but damn it, I want more steam in the bathroom!
Okay, I'm done whining now. If you can't tell, I'm in love with this chapter. Definitely pushed all the right buttons. I just bet Dax has a few tricks he'd love to show Jak and I can't wait to see what it. Seriously though, you either owe me a human!Dax stint in the bathroom with Jak (preferred method), or you have to give me the right to write it up, because I can't get it out of my head now. Which is bad, because there's something else I want to post, but I can't keep my focus on it. I keep daydreaming instead. Help a fangirl out??
Okay, I'm done whining now. If you can't tell, I'm in love with this chapter. Definitely pushed all the right buttons. I just bet Dax has a few tricks he'd love to show Jak and I can't wait to see what it. Seriously though, you either owe me a human!Dax stint in the bathroom with Jak (preferred method), or you have to give me the right to write it up, because I can't get it out of my head now. Which is bad, because there's something else I want to post, but I can't keep my focus on it. I keep daydreaming instead. Help a fangirl out??
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March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hrrrng you tease. :C (Loved the chapter, btw; it's funny how consistent your writing style is no matter what scene you're doing. XD A lot of people fall back on cliches or phrases other people wrote to get through things like action or sex scenes, but not yoooou.)
Andlol, wet ferret just smells musky, kinna like river water and dusty oil (use your imagination on that one). I know because I own a ferret. : D (fun fact: know how dogs kick their legs when you scratch 'em in the right spot? Ferrets and weasels do that too. Only instead of kicking their leg, they lick you. Uncontrollably. Like, ten licks a second. They even do it when you have 'em by the scruff. XD
Isn't that interestiiing.)
Andlol, wet ferret just smells musky, kinna like river water and dusty oil (use your imagination on that one). I know because I own a ferret. : D (fun fact: know how dogs kick their legs when you scratch 'em in the right spot? Ferrets and weasels do that too. Only instead of kicking their leg, they lick you. Uncontrollably. Like, ten licks a second. They even do it when you have 'em by the scruff. XD
Isn't that interestiiing.)
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
... You mention wet ottsels and we're the pervs? Now if that isn't the pot caling the kettle black.
Seriously though. I put a review on this yesterday night (iirc, it was midnight here) and now (morning) I find a new chapter. Didn't know inflating ego worked even if the author didn't read the review.
Really not much else to say, though Jak chewing Torn out was exhilarating. I bet Tattooed Wonder would like to be leashed, now wouldn't he?
Please refer to previous review for mah thoughts on ottsel smut (you're still good enough for both)
Seriously though. I put a review on this yesterday night (iirc, it was midnight here) and now (morning) I find a new chapter. Didn't know inflating ego worked even if the author didn't read the review.
Really not much else to say, though Jak chewing Torn out was exhilarating. I bet Tattooed Wonder would like to be leashed, now wouldn't he?
Please refer to previous review for mah thoughts on ottsel smut (you're still good enough for both)
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March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can't believe it took me so long to review this. Since I hear that inflating ego is a great way to have a writer churn out chapters, here I am.
Jak is just soo cute- reminds me of Derek from "The Swan Princess"- both hero types who get into awkward-clumsy-boy in front of the love interest. Now if we only had a couple of duets, a love montage and a guy snarking at Jak's clumsiness we could sell the plot to Disney! It'd be a blast.
... Gah. I just can't imagine Jak/ottsel Dax smut. Every time I try, I end up imagining Dax using Jak's member as barstool- which, while inherently funny, isn' much sexy. Guess the proportions are pretty skewed up in my mind, but I dun' care. The story is cute, and you're enough for us both to imagine :3
Jak is just soo cute- reminds me of Derek from "The Swan Princess"- both hero types who get into awkward-clumsy-boy in front of the love interest. Now if we only had a couple of duets, a love montage and a guy snarking at Jak's clumsiness we could sell the plot to Disney! It'd be a blast.
... Gah. I just can't imagine Jak/ottsel Dax smut. Every time I try, I end up imagining Dax using Jak's member as barstool- which, while inherently funny, isn' much sexy. Guess the proportions are pretty skewed up in my mind, but I dun' care. The story is cute, and you're enough for us both to imagine :3
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March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lucky lucky ottsel! I'm kind of jealous...
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn, it's been three chapters already and I haven't reviewed. Sorry, I've been kind of out of it recently. Stress from school and working two jobs :(
It is nice to see that you're still working so hard for all of us though: a sequel to Small Favors, and you're working on Keep Talking!?
Anyways, loving the story so far. Seeing Dax put in that position by Torn and being his usual stubborn self; having Dax nearly kidnapped only to have Jak leap to the rescue (although I kinda wish he'd done more than just scare them); and now having them go at it with Dax being clearheaded...
I really liked the pet angle to be honest, and I'm wondering how much fun you're planning on having with it. Looking forward to the next chapter!
It is nice to see that you're still working so hard for all of us though: a sequel to Small Favors, and you're working on Keep Talking!?
Anyways, loving the story so far. Seeing Dax put in that position by Torn and being his usual stubborn self; having Dax nearly kidnapped only to have Jak leap to the rescue (although I kinda wish he'd done more than just scare them); and now having them go at it with Dax being clearheaded...
I really liked the pet angle to be honest, and I'm wondering how much fun you're planning on having with it. Looking forward to the next chapter!