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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was very hot. Pretty cool turning the tables on him. If there's more, I'll definitely be reading.
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was crafted with care. I appreciate the demon’s characterization, well done. An interesting look at the Harrowing Origin from a different perspective. Seeing his confidence crumble as she sprung her own trap was quite entertaining.
The sex scene was exquisitely done. Some lines I appreciated:
“Her hands groped along his length in a desperate way, not nearly big enough to wrap around his hardness but still trying. Her mouth in its current form was not large enough to encompass even half of his head, though she attempted to with wanton need.”
“For some seconds, the lips of her cunt merely mashed against his rounded cockhead. Then, they began to give way and his tip entered into her. Only half of the head was inside the mage, but she had already begun crying out piercingly”
“If her body had been real, it would have ruptured and been split in twain by his fencepost sized rod. Instead, the surreal nature of the Fade allowed her stomach to stretch to an obscene size as her pelvis managed to mash against his own.”
Obviously, I like sex scenes with rather large male members. If by your tags, she is going to be using a rather large cock of her own in the real world, then I am very much intrigued. The possibility of manipulating and seducing her companions is titillating to say the least.
I am very much excited by a talented new author in this section. I hope to see more soon!
The sex scene was exquisitely done. Some lines I appreciated:
“Her hands groped along his length in a desperate way, not nearly big enough to wrap around his hardness but still trying. Her mouth in its current form was not large enough to encompass even half of his head, though she attempted to with wanton need.”
“For some seconds, the lips of her cunt merely mashed against his rounded cockhead. Then, they began to give way and his tip entered into her. Only half of the head was inside the mage, but she had already begun crying out piercingly”
“If her body had been real, it would have ruptured and been split in twain by his fencepost sized rod. Instead, the surreal nature of the Fade allowed her stomach to stretch to an obscene size as her pelvis managed to mash against his own.”
Obviously, I like sex scenes with rather large male members. If by your tags, she is going to be using a rather large cock of her own in the real world, then I am very much intrigued. The possibility of manipulating and seducing her companions is titillating to say the least.
I am very much excited by a talented new author in this section. I hope to see more soon!
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gonna come right out, I fucking LOVED this. I can't wait to see how much further you take this. A demon enhanced Mage would make for an awesome Warden, and the potential for further corruption just makes me want to read more and more. Might I hope for a corrupted and depraved Leliana?