rate_review Reviews

I love this story. YOu said you had so much planed. What happened? Did you get tired of it?

Okay, I know that this story probably won't be updated... But PLEASE UPDATE IT!!

I LOVE this fic SO MUCH!!! It has everything I love in a fic!! Please tell me if you will or won't be updating it. And if you won't, I may be willing to take it off your hands.

If you are interested, please E-mail me at khaoskyuubi@yahoo.com. Thank you. If you do not email me within a few months, I will assume that you don't care and that this fic is up for grabs.

-Khaos

I like your work, update soon.

Have you abandoned this? That's sad... I do so enjoyed the potential..

Please dear god let there be more!

This story is really well written and left me really wanting more. It was extremely hot and I really want to see this female warden get a chance to play outside the Fade.

Please write more!

You have a great deal planned? What can I do to get you to share more of this story with us? This such an awesome start. I really wanted to see your herm warden work her way through ferelden's lladies. I read your pokegirl story and loved it. Please write more of this or that!

Hey! Another talented writer joins the dragon age section! This beginning is truly well done and I hope it’s the sign of another awesome sexual saga! You seem to be pretty talented at creating a unique mood. Jus that first paragraph, I found pretty exquisite and it let me know I’d stumbled upon something special.

Very original, using the demon’s point of view to introduce your main character. It’s too bad we don’t know much about her though. Hopefully, we’ll learn more in the next chapter soon?

The sex scene was pretty sexy. I like how lusty the main character seems. Hopefully, massive cocks will be a theme given the tags you put.

Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter.

Another good Dragon Age Story! This such a tease though! I hope there's more. The way the mage is totally into taking the demon's huge cock was good. Herm? She's gonna have one too to use on Morrigan and Leliana? I can't wait. You're a good descriptive writer too, so I'm really excited. Please continue it soon, this beginnning is really a tease!

This was pretty awesome. You seem to be a pretty good writer, and you created a pretty damn good intro to your story. I checked out your Pokegirl story. If this one's going to be as good as that one, then we're in for a treat. Can't wait for more!

Wow, that was hot. Is she going to go all futa later on? That would make it even hotter!