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by passiveaggressor

person GodAlex
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Quite, QUITE an enjoyable fic, specially for Yuri fans such as me, in a fandom as overflown with Yaoi as Kingdom Hearts'.

Here hoping you write more of this. If you need some ideas, here are some:
-Naminé using her girls for more mundane utility, such as, say, have Larxene on all fours and serving her as chair as Naminé draws on her desk.
-The girls are forced to perform errands while carrying vibrators inside of them.
-Tickle torture. Two interesting ways to apply this: Have the girl tickled while she's getting fucked, forcing the ticking thrill into the orgasm. Or leaving the girl trapped in a tickling for hours as a form of punishment.
-Keeping girls on the edge. It's all the more hot when you get them to BEG for an orgasm.


Well, that's what I can think for now. Here hoping you write more of this, and to see what's the next girl Naminé will bring along! ^^
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well that was fucking hot! great work.
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like it! i cant wait 4 more!