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So many endings,ending of her arena career, ending of his virginity, ending of his obsession - what a complete use of the prompt!

This would be far more convincing that yelling at him to 'Get a life!'

Hahahah, nice one. Very sexy and evocative. Once again, your penchant for humour (Wood elves, eh?) does you credit, especially after this rather original way of getting rid of the annoying fan's incessant chatter. The sex was interesting and the writing had little details here and there to help the reader imagine the scene better. My only concern is that the fan doesn't become just as obsessed with sex!

This was great! I was snickering the whole way through... the reason they're called wood elves indeed! I actually never thought about ending someone's obsession quite that way, but damned if it didn't work. :D

The thought of a fight-arena geek, when it's a fight to the death situation (Orc or gladiator, etc.), never occurred to me before yet it makes perfect sense. Having a fanboy these days can be bad enough, but when he's making noise in a dangerous area it tends to attract unwanted attention. (Though it sounds like the Orc warrior may enjoy having a few skirmishes along the way.)

"Wood elves" gave me a good laugh, though the end where he's "a fan no more" was sad in a way. Absolutely, having normal interests is important, but to drop such a passion for the games and especially for his heroine seems like a great loss. One can only hope he'll make up for the lost time having more real fun. Heck, he's still young. :)