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for Ending the Fan

by JayDee

person Daye
schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha. Ha. Punderful. Born to be hung indeed. Can tell the assassin must have been low-born though; hanged is the past tense for people.
person Ronin
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is great stuff so far. I'd love to see the Champion really let herself go and get gangbanged by more well-hung creatures (other orcs maybe, or more minotaurs). At the same time, seeing her take a few more doses of that magical potion and really ream out some men would be really hot too.
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 really was great. I didn't even care it lacked... certain content, and that's saying something. Love where the story's going, keep up the good work!
person Daye
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good use of the prompt. Even in such a brief word count the chapter was by turns amusing and touching. Nice to see there's some actual heroism beneath the rampant lusts, both blood and otherwise...
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love how she explaiend that, so impassioned was she
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
All I can really say is this is an awesome story, and I hope you continue. There's just something I love about strong, powerful women being helpless, or more exactly letting themselves be helpless. Powerful women who are secretly submissive and are just waiting for the right hard fucking to convince them to put on a dress and bend over happily. Unrealistic, but fucking erotic...excuse the pun.
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is beyond hot!
person Daye
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking Moz is lucky to have such bonuses to her endurance and strength.:P Otherwise she might not have made it through that.

And Fanroth is a sneaky git but not too smart. Orc barbarians than can crush your head like fine china and kill people as a lifestyle choice are not the kind of people you [i]try[/i] and tick off.
person Daye
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dang! What a place to end it!

Poor Bosmer! I wonder what length's he'll go to to outdo the Minotaur's performance?
person Daye
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This fic just keeps getting better and better. Weirder as well but nothing wrong with that. Would have been interesting if Moz had followed through on her original threat.