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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This bit of Portal fan-fiction is so very hot, I hope to read the continuation of it soon but I have to ask will you continue some of the alternate story paths or just put in what if's for the different test chambers?
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interested to see where you go. Hoping for some f/f next chapter!
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
man Chell can not win
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April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This isn't so much a review as me just saying I really love what you're doing with this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes next. :)
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...so when I dropped the companion cube down into the incinerator I really was dropping a girl...suddenly I'm even more scared of Portal...great story, great story
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, but pretty short.
Hope for more! Some f/f maybe?
Hope for more! Some f/f maybe?
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Most interesting story you have, I think. Please more!
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories on the site!
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that this is not end of this story, this is one of the best machine stories ever
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is getting tense...can't wait to see what happens to Chell next