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February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You should make more of these stories , I love them all
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just, wow.
When I first read this, I thought that chapter 4 was the end, and I came out with the opinion that it was a damn well-written story.
...And then you posted chapter 5 to 8 and my interest was piqued even more. By chapter 10 I'd gotten mood whiplash. Just as soon as it seemed that things might turn out for the better (I was actually happy that Senna forgave Vaen and was willing to be friends even after what he did.), things took a turn for the sinister. I actually feel really sad for Senna's character, she's the kind of pure-hearted character you'd hate to see bad things happen to.
Right now I'm at the edge of my seat, waiting to see how the tome's plan pans out. So PLEASE update soon.
Thanks.
When I first read this, I thought that chapter 4 was the end, and I came out with the opinion that it was a damn well-written story.
...And then you posted chapter 5 to 8 and my interest was piqued even more. By chapter 10 I'd gotten mood whiplash. Just as soon as it seemed that things might turn out for the better (I was actually happy that Senna forgave Vaen and was willing to be friends even after what he did.), things took a turn for the sinister. I actually feel really sad for Senna's character, she's the kind of pure-hearted character you'd hate to see bad things happen to.
Right now I'm at the edge of my seat, waiting to see how the tome's plan pans out. So PLEASE update soon.
Thanks.
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
He's still gonna get his ass kicked right? xD hope so
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January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
0.0 He's going to come back and save her, right?
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and dark. You -almost- make me pity him.
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was dark! And awww, I kept waiting for her to bust out and carve him a new one, you know, kick the full ten shades of shit out of him but...wasn't the way it was meant to go eh? His reason for doing what he did in the end (i.e. having too much to loose) is apparently why people kill their victims in real life, too...scary hey!
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice writing, as always, and as dark as always, too. The shift in Vaen's attitude from a normal kind of guy you can empathise with into - well, I dont' want to spoil it for anyone by saying too much here - was really cleverly done. I hope you update this soon, I really want to see what happens next. Nice work!