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Ohh? this going to go with Tekken 6 ending? you know Jin vs Azazel? but good luck with this one

Hello, it's the Anonymous reviewer from before. :D

I've recently started to replay Tekken 6 again, after a good 3+ years, and decided to look for entertaining Tekken fanfiction. You have no idea how happy I am that you've decided to continue this. I've missed reading well-written Hwoarang/Jin stories.

By the way, I want to point out real quick an error that I noticed.

- He gave the same frown at the stillness and muttered sotto voce -

I think you meant 'voice' there. Other than that, your newest chapter was delightful.

Also, the bit near the end about Jin's nightmares got me to ponder what his nightmares might involve. In the Scenario Campaign mode he mentions to Lars about hearing 'a voice in his head' and reveals that it's Azazel. Part of me wonders (in your story, at least) if the nightmares are being triggered by Azazel and that's what's inducing Jin to commit to war. That's complete speculation on my part, though.

I also can't help but notice Steve's actions around Hwoarang seem suspicious. Hm.

Nonetheless, hooray for the newest chapter. I eagerly await more. :)

Damn. Another unfinished story. I'm having bad luck today. :(

Your Intimate Rivals story was WONDERFUL, so I thought I'd read the sequel. It's too bad that it's unfinished, but that's just how things go sometimes.

I'll keep Intimate Rivals bookmarked for now as I love the intimacy. It makes it so much more heartfelt than pure porn, though the sex scenes you had were super hot in that one. Even better than your other Tekken stories. :D

I doubt you'll continue this, but what is here is enjoyable. :)

so many beautiful men!

why is steve so adorable in this?! ^_^

i loved the banter between lee and kazuya in chapter 3 lol