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October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your wordplay or whatever is amazing. Love it. The way you convey emotions, feelings, actions...love it. The way things are quick and easy, zoom, like that. I have no idea what I'm saying.
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September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That last line really hurt and definitely drove the point home exactly how much /damage/ Adachi was able to do with his awful bullshit, jeezus.
Writing wise, this was excellently done. As a piece about a non-consensual relationship - with a /minor/ - you hit on all the spots of awful discomfort that this sort of story should acknowledge.
And it was sexually gratifying to read, too.
Writing wise, this was excellently done. As a piece about a non-consensual relationship - with a /minor/ - you hit on all the spots of awful discomfort that this sort of story should acknowledge.
And it was sexually gratifying to read, too.
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December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damn was hoping he made souji his sex slave; oh well.
This had mind fuck all over it totally and I enjoyed it. Pairing is thus rare.
This had mind fuck all over it totally and I enjoyed it. Pairing is thus rare.
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December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is just excellent. The Adachi moodswings and scariness just peeping out through the cracks. Souji just getting sucked into his damage, attracted/repulsed and not understanding how he is being mindfucked or Adachi's pathology. Love it. I really enjoyed your characterizations and the so-wrong-can't-stop dynamic that made the smut kind of hot/uncomfortable.