rate_review Reviews

The descriptions were very well turned! I'm not familiar with the fandom, but I could see the scene and feel the emotions. Nice work!

This prompt response seems very poetically phrased, is it an actual poem format?

"Wine colored drops on pristine snow," is phrased very beautifully. Thanks for sharing! PW

First off, I have no knowledge of the series, but this is a nicely composed little peek into at least one relationship. The opening imagery let's me see the beauty while also feeling Dante's contempt at the same time. Then the fight is swift, and very one-sided. In the end we learn that it's a codependent relationship and that Dante's hatred is as much at himself too.

At least that's what I take away from it. Even if wrong, it did put me in a moment.

Hahah, that is so Dante. Playful, nonchalant and getting the snot beaten out of him! But seriously, this is... kind of sad, in a way. It's like he doesn't know how to connect to Vergil, which we all know is pretty screwed up already. Lovely take on their relationship AND way to get original with the prompt! It was nice, that the 'snow' was actually kind of a metaphor for their relationship. Very nicely done.