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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*
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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More, NOW. I dont know how you made it work but you did. They just work so Awesome together! And that Jak is the virgin is both in-character and adorable. This story rocks!
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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh, and here I thought I was jealous of Tess getting that peepshow in Small Favors. Well anyways, while straight/bi isn't really my thing, this threesome is pretty damn hot. And it's nice of you to do a gift fic, especially considering how you're currently juggling 3 different stories (4 if you've already started the sequel to Talk to Me).
The atmosphere setup was beautiful here; both the environment and characters really worked together to set the mood. Sometimes organized romantic evenings can be fun too right?
Hope you can get more writing done before the holiday rush really starts up. Although, since you've already given us 3 chapters in the past 3 weeks or so, I don't think anyone would fault you for taking a well deserved break.
The atmosphere setup was beautiful here; both the environment and characters really worked together to set the mood. Sometimes organized romantic evenings can be fun too right?
Hope you can get more writing done before the holiday rush really starts up. Although, since you've already given us 3 chapters in the past 3 weeks or so, I don't think anyone would fault you for taking a well deserved break.
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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just wow!!
I was surprised to see another new fic from you - but I know how hard it is to continue on things when you already have ideas for new ones.
I think in "Small Favors" you mentioned you wanted to write something with these three...and the mentioning of their past experiences remindend me alot of "Fun and Games" but it isn't a continuation of any of those, right?
Not that all of your stories are well written, cute and extremely sexy, but this one is especially turning-on, even if it hasn't really started yet!
I really can't wait for the next chapter...ohh pleaaase hurry :3
I was surprised to see another new fic from you - but I know how hard it is to continue on things when you already have ideas for new ones.
I think in "Small Favors" you mentioned you wanted to write something with these three...and the mentioning of their past experiences remindend me alot of "Fun and Games" but it isn't a continuation of any of those, right?
Not that all of your stories are well written, cute and extremely sexy, but this one is especially turning-on, even if it hasn't really started yet!
I really can't wait for the next chapter...ohh pleaaase hurry :3
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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is this yer first threesome? If it is, ya can't tell...Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one...was kinda suprised ya have another story goin'. Hope ya didn't forget about the last chapter to "All That Glitters"....of course ya didn't...haha....Love the threesome idea..... Update soon!
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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This has needed to be done for a while now, and bless you for doing it. Tess never gets much love even though it seems universally accepted that she'd be the one telling Jak and Dax to get their acts together. It's nice to see her get some action...though I would love to be fly on the wall myself. You keep making my inner fangirl squeal like this and something bad's gonna happen, I know it.