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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Some bat time? *looks confused* *shakes head* Okay, any way loved the chapter! *hands ya a plate of brownies* That's for posting two chapters in your two stories this week. You're on a roll! Love the stories. Love! Love! Love!
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December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, I find myself enjoying this story more and more.
Excellent teamwork between Dax and Tess, seems like they really have it out for the poor hero. I was a bit surprised by the slightly dark turn when it came time to unveil Jak's...damage. In fact, it reminded me of a very angst filled fic called Just Another Mission. You managed to turn the situation around though, so props for that.
And damn, all of this and they're still just getting warmed up? Despite not being into straight/bi, I'm still looking forward to having the demolition duo treat Tess like a lady in the next chapter.
Keep up the great work!
Excellent teamwork between Dax and Tess, seems like they really have it out for the poor hero. I was a bit surprised by the slightly dark turn when it came time to unveil Jak's...damage. In fact, it reminded me of a very angst filled fic called Just Another Mission. You managed to turn the situation around though, so props for that.
And damn, all of this and they're still just getting warmed up? Despite not being into straight/bi, I'm still looking forward to having the demolition duo treat Tess like a lady in the next chapter.
Keep up the great work!
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh~ There's gonna be a part three. XD *fans herself* Yay. ^////////////^
*salutes* Lookin' forward to it. Most definitely. X3
*salutes* Lookin' forward to it. Most definitely. X3
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December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*pouts* No outtakes? Ah well...can't have everything....that was hot...Jak's a fast learner! Update soon!
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December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another Chapter!
Daxter as a cute little tyrant, thats just how we like him :D Poor Daxxie had to practise with Tess Toys...*imagines a big, bright pink dildo*
“Question. Do I get to nail Daxter tonight? Because I really want to.”
Best part ever! I had to lay the laptop beside my because i was laughing so hard all of sudden!
DO you know how much you tease your readers? I thought the "action" would happen in this chapter, but its still "only" the foreplay. Besides the fact that it gets hotter and hotter.
Daxter as a cute little tyrant, thats just how we like him :D Poor Daxxie had to practise with Tess Toys...*imagines a big, bright pink dildo*
“Question. Do I get to nail Daxter tonight? Because I really want to.”
Best part ever! I had to lay the laptop beside my because i was laughing so hard all of sudden!
DO you know how much you tease your readers? I thought the "action" would happen in this chapter, but its still "only" the foreplay. Besides the fact that it gets hotter and hotter.
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December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, first of all, Tess' reaction to Jak's scars? Absolutely precious. And slightly frightening, for whomever would be at the wrong end of it. Second, poor, innocent Jak. So much he wishes he didn't know now. And lastly, I wish I were Tess. Like, you don't even know how much I wish I were her. Especially considering the lesson plan of the upcoming chapter, eh? ;D Can't wait for the next update!
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December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...oh wow... Just...wow... I'm so glad Jak's starting to get into it. He's cute when he's being shy and uncertain, but so undeniably sexy when his confidence kicks in. And Daxter totally needs to pay for being such a pushy brat.
As for what happens to my well-fed inner fangirl... Well, at best, I will embarrass myself by sporting a rosy blush for hours on end, drawing many confused and concerned comments from well-meaning friends and family that will only make it worse. At worst, I will *really* embarrass myself by somehow coming to the conclusion that I have something to add to the fandom, write my own piece, and subsequently die from horror at what I've inflicted upon the world.
This, by all means, should not stop you, because this is pushing all the right buttons for me, including the one that makes me speechless for minutes at a time.
As for what happens to my well-fed inner fangirl... Well, at best, I will embarrass myself by sporting a rosy blush for hours on end, drawing many confused and concerned comments from well-meaning friends and family that will only make it worse. At worst, I will *really* embarrass myself by somehow coming to the conclusion that I have something to add to the fandom, write my own piece, and subsequently die from horror at what I've inflicted upon the world.
This, by all means, should not stop you, because this is pushing all the right buttons for me, including the one that makes me speechless for minutes at a time.
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O/////o Careful what you wish for, 'cuz you just might get it. *fans herself*
Um... Yeah. More please. X3 *blush*
Um... Yeah. More please. X3 *blush*
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Our work is never done, Robin. XD I love this chapter so much!
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December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!!! D,: So sexy. Please update soon.