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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I... would like to see Tess doing Daxter as well, Jak.
Also, I know I wanted to be Tess last chapter, but this chapter I kinda wanted to be Daxter. ;] Except for the maid outfit part (I'm preferable to the apron myself).
And totally random, but when I read the part where Jak said it was half past one, I looked at my clock and it was totally 1:30.
Also, I know I wanted to be Tess last chapter, but this chapter I kinda wanted to be Daxter. ;] Except for the maid outfit part (I'm preferable to the apron myself).
And totally random, but when I read the part where Jak said it was half past one, I looked at my clock and it was totally 1:30.
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want to thank you for inadvertently winning me 20 bucks, because now I'm not the only one who thinks Daxter and Tess's relationship is kinky enough to include a strap-on amid a wide range of other things. I owe you cookies.
Thank you for the wonderful story! That was such an awesome romp, I really don't know what else to say about it. Indeed, my inner fangirl has been well appeased and is hard at work trying to erase my embarrassment so that I post something and not just horde everything in a notebook. As are my friends, and now my muse. I'm gonna lose this fight relatively quickly.
Looking forward to Keep Talking! Keep it up!
Thank you for the wonderful story! That was such an awesome romp, I really don't know what else to say about it. Indeed, my inner fangirl has been well appeased and is hard at work trying to erase my embarrassment so that I post something and not just horde everything in a notebook. As are my friends, and now my muse. I'm gonna lose this fight relatively quickly.
Looking forward to Keep Talking! Keep it up!
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HAAAA ha ha haaa~! XD That'd be a riot if that's really what Sig said. X3 And I can only imagine Torn's face.... HA!
But why ruin good grape jelly like that, Dax? That's my only beef with this chapter. XD Anyway, YEAH! Hot and sweet, all at once. ^w^ You had a perfect balance of that the whole time, and it was a treat to read. =3
I'm lookin' forward to Keep Talking! ^o^ See ya then! =3
But why ruin good grape jelly like that, Dax? That's my only beef with this chapter. XD Anyway, YEAH! Hot and sweet, all at once. ^w^ You had a perfect balance of that the whole time, and it was a treat to read. =3
I'm lookin' forward to Keep Talking! ^o^ See ya then! =3
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story. Funny ending! Can't wait fer your next story!
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Glee!*
I love it! Love it love it love it love it! Thank you so much~
I love it! Love it love it love it love it! Thank you so much~
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think I could come to like this bi/hetero stuff. At least when it's you writing it...or, admittedly, the Internutter (although I doubt anyone has read any of her fanfiction here; it's pretty old X-men Evolution stuff that I haven't read since my high school days).
Anyways, that was spectacular. Loved the addition of Jak's "gift", as well as the Jak sandwich at the end. I'm wondering how you're going to handle the character relationships in the next chapter though. Should be interesting to see how the three of them decide to go on from this point. Seems like Jak was really affected by Daxter's admission of love, but Daxter also seems tied tightly with Tess...so will the relationship revolve around Daxter, Jak, Tess, or will it be an equal distribution? Really looking forward to the conclusion of this story.
(Also, I'm very glad you decided to offset Just Another Mission with Talk to Me. I think that fic filled my angst allowance for the next 5 years, and reading your work has really helped to even that out for me.)
Anyways, that was spectacular. Loved the addition of Jak's "gift", as well as the Jak sandwich at the end. I'm wondering how you're going to handle the character relationships in the next chapter though. Should be interesting to see how the three of them decide to go on from this point. Seems like Jak was really affected by Daxter's admission of love, but Daxter also seems tied tightly with Tess...so will the relationship revolve around Daxter, Jak, Tess, or will it be an equal distribution? Really looking forward to the conclusion of this story.
(Also, I'm very glad you decided to offset Just Another Mission with Talk to Me. I think that fic filled my angst allowance for the next 5 years, and reading your work has really helped to even that out for me.)
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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on your first three-way--very hot and totally worth the wait. I love that Tess gets violent in the throes of passion. In the middle of everything, it was a nice reminder that she is not a powder puff, made from the same stern stuff the boys are. It was awesome seeing that come through. I also feel bad for Jak. He just couldn't let it go until the morning, could he? Boy needs to learn to stop picking up trouble before it gets to him--he attracts enough on a normal basis. He doesn't need to ask for it, too.
And you have no reason to be self-conscious; you should give yourself more credit. You and Amaronith both have good ideas, smooth styles, and imaginations that people obviously enjoy. And I do write for the fandom (one theme piece on fanfiction.net under Tawnya Kisaragi if you're *really* that interested), it's just not anything I figure is worth posting most of the time, least of all here. You should know, however, that several friends of mine agree with you that I should post anyway...and I'll end up caving sooner than later. Just don't hold your breath for anytime soon. Don't want you to die before this is finished.
And you have no reason to be self-conscious; you should give yourself more credit. You and Amaronith both have good ideas, smooth styles, and imaginations that people obviously enjoy. And I do write for the fandom (one theme piece on fanfiction.net under Tawnya Kisaragi if you're *really* that interested), it's just not anything I figure is worth posting most of the time, least of all here. You should know, however, that several friends of mine agree with you that I should post anyway...and I'll end up caving sooner than later. Just don't hold your breath for anytime soon. Don't want you to die before this is finished.
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I cannot stop smiling! I love this fic so much! *glee*
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That... was... HAWT. omg I'm speechless, seriously. ^/////^
lmao And sugar rushes for the win. XD Until later!
lmao And sugar rushes for the win. XD Until later!
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Psh, what, no outtakes? Then again, between Jak's new "wristband" and him and Dax "killing" Tess, maybe actual outtakes were unneeded. Seriously, I was like hot, hotter, HOT, hotty-hot hot HOT, aaaaand... wristband, Jak? Really? *facepalm* Also, there's going to be another chapter? Huzzah! Is it going to have more of Tess' boobs? Cause seriously, those things are awesome.