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I could so see Daxter getting pregnant by Jak. ;)

“Getting my light eco powers,” Jak said softly, without hesitation. “When I’m Light… it wipes away all the bad, Dax. It’s like I can see perfectly. I saw you. You’re the best thing I’ve got.”

made me cry with joy, NO JOKE!!! lol and the whole sig and damus thing omg hahahaha laughed out loud

Oh, I hope Jak ended up with bruises. Or lumps; that would be acceptable too. He deserves to be mauled after spending so much time wandering around for inspiration and coming up with nothing better than a "yeah, me too." *facepalm* Jak's incredible density aside, I'm so glad there's no more misunderstanding between them. It's only needed to happen for a while. Though I admit to being a little weirded out by Sig and Damas kissing... I'm totally there for the hot older man thing...but...yeah...Not gonna look at either of them straight for a while.

Thanks for the happy ending!

*big, big grin* ^_____________________^ Hotness abounds. XD

Except for the Sig/Damas thing. As nice as it is to know that the king has someone like that in his life, I have to agree with Daxter. "Old guys. Love lives. Does not compute!" X3

But awwwww~ Jak had been trying to tell Dax he loved him for the whole trip! Nice bit of acting, though, while he was still in Light form. Then again, he DOES have a lot of experience being mute, so it's not that big a surprise. XD Cute, though. =3

You always find a way to bring these two together in a way that makes me either giggle, melt, or do both at the same time. I love it. ^w^

See ya next time! =D

*glee*

*waves Damas/Sig flag*

*more glee*

Gotta love outtakes! That last scene was hilarious! BTW, are you going to do a Damas and Sig story? That would be a good one.

Love your story. I always though Jak & Dax would be gay if Dax never got turned into an ottsel. Here's a story idea for you, Jak gets turned into and Ottsel and Daxter becomes the hero. There you go! Loved the story!

That was an interesting change of pace, and very interesting character development. You know, it seems like Jak is the one who isn't doing enough talking this time around, which makes this a bit of a parallel to Talk to Me. Heck, you even reversed the massage scene didn't you? Or am I reading too much into this?

Anyways, I'm enjoying the slow romance, especially after the extra sensual experience of Tertiary. Although it looks like things are going to heat up next chapter, and I can't wait for the conclusion of this story series. I'm kinda wondering how you're going to fit it all into one chapter though.

Aw...Dax has it so bad. I feel for him; he's really wound himself into knots over this. Now I just wanna cuddle him, though a good cuddle is most definitely the last thing on his list of things needed right now. I know Jak's more of an actions-speak-louder kind of guy, but he needs to learn that the right words said at the right time can mean a million times more to someone, and he really should know better when it comes to Daxter.

I know talking would equal less drama, and therefore render the point of the story moot, but I still wanna smack them for being so stubborn. Oh well... Write on and save them from themselves, please.

As always a wonderful story. Hey i was wondering, do you think you could to a Mass Effect or Halo story?