AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Bottoms Up

by crymsonpassion

person ParadiseAvenger
schedule May 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was completely and totally awesome. I loved seeing the reasoning behind the switch. I love Roxas and Sora as twins. I loved how cute and sweet Sora and Riku were and how spicy and sexy Roxas and Axel were. It was perfect. Kudos to you!
person Jenmoon1
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow hot
person Destry
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was a great plot! It had definite humor, connection, and realism; I really enjoyed it! Can I just say your progression as a witer is very tangible! You can tell from the start of "Accidental Infactuation," to the end, you discovered some great author skills. Please E-mail me anytime you need any assistance in editing~ fr33subs@yahoo.com
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was bloody hot!!! It was great having Sora lead Riku through it, I quite liked the lovey doveyness of it all. All up you wrote a fantastic sex scene ^_^ great job!
person Iyasu
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, sure, those are horrible grades, lol. Sora and Riku were just hot. I love seeing a bottom Riku, it's like a special treat for me. Can't wait to see the next chapter, awesome job.