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for Centaur Mother

by JayDee

schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So the entire power of the horn was used up on by sheer horniness?

It was an interesting little tale and had enough background for those only familiar with Tomb Raider in passing. (I think I've seen part of the movie.) The accelerating buildup was great, especially just at the point where she started to lose control. The "lovemaking" itself was extremely powerful and raw in its description, making it seem as rough and wrong and dirty as it would be. Adding in the bit about how the farmer was revolted by the sight eased into the explanation of how the cornucopia's power had been spent. (Too bad it doesn't slowly recharge or something. It would be great to have at least a bit of its powers on my side. ;))

Thanks for sharing another compelling entry into the challenge pool.
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome !!!!!! hope u continue the story