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for T3B - Slut Makeover

by salarta

person MassNinjaGaiden
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You missed the fucking point,tscecest. Of course you did not see anything wrong with the 3rd Birthday because it was designed with perverts and casuals such as yourself in mind. Yes it was dumb of Aya Brea to be wearing a mimiskirt in the desert but that still does not come even close to the vast amount of stupidity The Third Birthday presented such as the infamous clothes mechanic.



schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story was terrible and you should feel bad. You try to pretend to have some moral intellect through some dialogue that tries to appear like it has some hidden moral message when it's really quite blatant, totally wrong in it's accusations, and woefully showing little more than a mary-sue self-insert. Overall it was boring, predictable, and an utter waste of my time to read it. Come up with something INTERESTING next time, would you?
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a terrible attempt at bashing The Third birthday. I share you utter dislike of the new game,but this wasn't the right manner. Aya should have done medieval on Square Enix or something,not participate in your sick twisted rape fantasies.

And your author's notes at the beginning couldn't have been more pretentious.
person SailorAF
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good and interesting story. I like it.
person tscecest
schedule November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Because hunting monsters in the desert wearing a miniskirt is so much better.

I didn't care for this one, mostly because of your notes at the beginning. I saw nothing wrong with 3rd Birthday, and your author tract was pretty annoying and, in my opinion, uncalled for.