rate_review Reviews

Hmmm, pretty good story. I was a bit disappointed at the lack of full intercourse, but then I realized that it just worked *perfectly* in the end with her doubting if the whole thing had really happened or not. The description of the act itself was pretty awesome and hot, you get kudos for that. I was a bit surprised at points when you remarked about the 'humidity' of the desert (and especially in a town called Dryfield!) but it's just nitpickery. You definitely get her personality right, and drunk Kyle was hilarious and spot on. The angsting and overall depression was well portrayed. It wasn't excessively emphasized, but it was still there.

Overall pretty cool. There's a terribly sad lack of Parasite Eve stories around here, so you get my admiration for that and for having written one so well.