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This was pretty amazing. Thank you for such a creative and hot story. :D

Wow...Just wow. This is absolutely incredible!! Your grammar and wording worked perfectly, your plot is so original yet completely awesome, and you gave such a perfect persona to cute little Sora! God, the heartless character was perfect. If only there was more... T_T I wish there was another chapter.

This was great! Keep going! :D

I really liked this! This is the first Sora x tentacle!heartless story that I have ever read. You did a really good job with it, it was very sexy and fun to read. I kind of wonder if Sora will ever run into this heartless ever again. ....And if it has any relation to the "mystery goo" that you have to hunt for in-game.

A cum-stealing Heartless, now that's a new one. XD This story was a mix of disturbing...to the point of almost regretting to click on it, but interesting at the same time. I love how you portrayed Sora, how valiant he was throughout the whole ordeal, determined to get away and feel disgusted, where in most stories the character gives in and eventually ends up liking it...falling in love, that sort of thing. But you really captured his actual, from-the-game, personality. Just because he's the Keyblade Master, doesn't mean he can handle everything. That's the reality part, not the game. If you lose, in reality, you don't get a second chance to 'retry'. I love your writing style too. Great job. ^^