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for Inevitable

by RememberThisPenName

person Kyle83a
schedule November 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ok, I just finished reading your story....I honestly couldn't put it down!!!

I absolutely loved your story, and I am a HUGE InFamous fan!

I was thrilled to find this, the two characters fit so well and you kept true to the events in Coles story.

Absolutely BRILLIANT!!!!!

person ConArtist643
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and would adore a sequel!!! Seeing Alex in a place like New Mare would RULE! as far as critisim I dont really have any. The writing is good and the story is solid for the most part. well like i said a sequel would be nice *hint* *hint* keep up the good work
person braxy29x
schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
whew! okay, i finished, and i loved it! i think it would be great if you continue writing this story, and i don't just mean one more chapter. found your prequel last night, and i will be reading it next. thanks so much for a great story, and i hope you keep at it!
person braxy29x
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
here! here, dammit! i love infamous, and i agree that there are not nearly enough fics about it! haven't played prototype, but i knew the gist of it. wow, cole and alex, what a combo! i'm loving your story! i don't usually use so many exclamation marks, but wow!!!
schedule November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I had to join just to review this. You've done a really great job on this -- I really love how you took their relationship... slow, and realistic, I guess is how I'm trying to say? They didn't just fuck and immediately love one another -- so I'm glad you treated it like a real relationship. I also really liked the ending; not really sunshine and butterflies, but hopeful and resolute without having to outright say things. And, well, the smut, that was nice too. ;D Awesome fic!
person =^^=
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your entire story and let me just say... loved. it. The supowered sex was awesome and cute cudddly adorable Alex was way awesome. Your writing is amazing awesome!

Please... write more!!!!

Thank you...
person kesseki
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed this story so far, read everything that's up so far in one go! I really enjoy the idea of a cuddly Alex, so extra kudos for that. Would you consider writing a prequel for the first time they met/had sex?