rate_review Reviews

Breath-taking. The height of arousal from reading this is off the charts. Well done.

Sequel please! =D *hugs* I do believe this fic is my favorite one so far ^_^

hee, I really liked this story. Damah is gorgeous, and Anik is a beast. there's some nice build-up in the sexual tension when they get to the mine, and then some pretty awesome confrontation/violence when the rogue shows up. that was a cool move dude. really ramped up the tension, but also ramped up the kind of... bond between the two. these are some cool characters, and whatever they have between them is a pretty interesting read. I hope you actually are serious about continuing this.

if you're at all interested in improvement-feedback, I'd say the one spot this story is lacking is in Anik's motivation for capturing her and bringing her to the cave. maybe I missed something, but the way I read it, he just kinda grabs her and then heads for it, rather than... I dunno, grabbing her and then mentioning that he had to get away before the party comes back looking for their healer, or being interrupted in the tower by them, or I dunno. something a little more just in that sextion wouldn't be bad, ya know? or not. just saying, that's all. if you don't care that's cool too.

Of all of your stories posted here so far, this is one of my favorites. Eloquently written, and the mood is set nicely; the tension, the danger and best of all the insinuating romance combined with the hot sex!

Absolutely amazing, loved the sex and the characters. I eagerly await chapter 2. (hope they get a happy ending and babies. 5 Stars.