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NOOOOOOO!!! It cant end there!!! Sora!!! You know you have kinda made me hate Riku a little more for this...Lol. I hope you write more. I need to know if he turned Sora into a merman or not (cuz thats what i would do if i was as obsessed and selfish as Riku. Please write more!!!

I cant wait for your next chapter and update. I check it every night. I hope you update soon. This cliffy is killing me lol. Keep up the great work XD

I love this story and I don't mind you writing non-human/human pairings. It's awesome and helps you stand out. Plus if you love what your doing then why stop? It's your passion. Flow with it!

This might be one of my favorite Kingdom Hearts fanfics and I've read MANY of them. I just wish you would update a little faster, but it's all good.

Riku's a dick in this story, but I believe he'll get better once Sora can actually say how much of a dick he's been to him. I'm just saying. The truth shall set you free.

Please make many more non-human/human stories! Plenty more, especially if they are going to be about mermaids, which I love! Thanks for this new chapter

OMG it's getting even more EPIC! Were really getting into the nittygritty now, I could really feel the urgency in Riku's actions. And what are Sora's parents gonna think when they discover him missing and follow the trail of blood leading them to the ocean?! Oh the suspense is gonna kill me until the next chappie DX !!

OMG. UPDATE SOON PLEASE. this story is too good. i also really like ur writing style. succinct but filled with details. nice.

OMG WHY DID THAT CHAPTER HAVE TO END LIKE THAT!?!?!?!?! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IMMA GO INSANE!!!!! I NEEEEEEEED TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHH CLIFFHANGER OF DEATH!!!!! DDDDDDDD:



Freaking. Epic.

oh my god thank you thank you thank you. I love this so much. keep up the good work.

OMG! Poor Sora. That must have felt so freaky, and now this! Instead of just getting busy (even thought I love it) Sora should really teach him English or Japanese or How to communicate. I really dislike the Orca's even though they helped Riku impregnate Sora. But seriously even if he properly mates with Sora how can they be together. Sora can't breath underwater, and Riku doesn't have legs! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I need to know more. I hate these long long long waits. Oh god oh god I need to know more as to whats going on to sora and what Riku will do when he finds out what he didn't know!

OMG, now I'm gonna be hanging from suspense until the next chappie to find out what the heck happened! (O_o)